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Leafy


𝓘𝓽'𝓼 𝓲𝓻𝓸𝓷𝓲𝓬 𝓱𝓸𝔀 𝓯𝓪𝓽𝓮 𝓬𝓪𝓷 𝓫𝓮~

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Rarity keeps on forgetting everything, and it's outrageous!

Surn does not want in on this, but when it comes to friendship, It's his duty to, help I guess?

"I'm gonna regret this." :facehoof:


The first story of: The crazed adventures of Surn. Enjoy!

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Comments ( 6 )

So a couple things...

Your pretty much welcome!

That should be "You're pretty much welcome!" You need to know the difference between you're and your, because you make the same mistake several times.

casueing

It's spelled causing.

nocking

It's spelled knocking.

I guess I should read what stories you put out.... Heavy news... I'm not an equestria girl fan.... but this story made me change my mind just a pinch of thought.

Some of the things here don’t make sense, but it was all right.

This is relatable to me sometimes when I don't get sleep lol. I love this weird short story. It's so straight to the point. Very good. Poor guy.

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