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Is it wrong to think Cadence is best princess? Is it wrong to think Feather Bangs is best pony? I certainly don't think so.

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What if Feather Bangs goes on some dates with the Main Six? This question will be answered through this story as it involves Feather Bangs going on multiple dates with Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie. Will there be romance growing from these dates? Read along to find out!

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Ooh, this sounds interesting! I don't usually read romance stories, but this caught my eye. Let's start reading!

To be precise, what I find intriguing about this story is the plot of Feather Bangs interacting with the Mane Six. We don't seem to have a lot of that, let alone having it be on-on-one.

As for this chapter; good usage of them doing animal care activities as a date! I like that; it's unique!

Poor Feather though... :fluttershyouch: Angel still annoys me...

Oh so now feather bang going for the main six huh

"Ow!" Feather yelled as he rubbed where the acorn was hit. Feather looked to notice a small, white bunny holding another acorn while giving a menacing glare.

Angel 😡

When Angel got his batch of seeds in his paws, he took some of it and threw it at some of the nearby woodpeckers. The woodpeckers got startled from getting hit by the seeds and turned to see who threw them. They all spotted Angel who pointed at Feather as a gesture meaning that the stallion was the one who threw the seeds. Anger grew in the woodpeckers as they flew down to Feather and started pecking him with their sharp beaks.

That little evil bunny 😡 🐰

"I'm so sorry for Angel's misbehavior towards you. He can be a bit much when it comes to me spending time with stallions."

Misbehave is a very understatement

"They look so cute together." Discord said before he formed an evil grin. "Perhaps they could use some chaos in their little date."

Come on Discord have mercy on feather Bang it was already bad enough that the angel mess with him

So feather bang wants to date one of the main six ok cool Fluttershy was too busy to take care of the animals but feather Bang volunteer to help Fluttershy's animals but unfortunately thanks to that no-good bunny angel giving him such a hard time but good thing he got caught by Fluttershy towards the end and fluttershy even given him a Kiss as a award this was a pretty good chapter so I wonder who's next 🤔

I'd like to know what were the numerical chances of Feather winning the raffle. Was it 1 in 100? 1 in 250? 1 in 500?

On another note, I'm really liking this story, and it just got an addition to one of my bookshelves!

"That would be me," Feather said with a smile. "I got to say that it's such an honor to meet an amazing mare such as yourself." Feather then flipped his mane to show off his swagger.

Oh gosh dang it feather bang 🤣

this was a good chapter.

Wow this was surely an interesting date so feather Bang won a raffle tickets to hang out with Rainbow Dash even though the date did not go too well but it felt like they had fun with each other even though they only started out as friends which of course you have to build up those kind of relationships if they want to become more than friends but this was a very interesting chapter I wonder who's next

Rarity continued. "For starters, the portions were very small and they tasted very bland. We went to another restaurant but it was still the same. This was because the restaurants wanted to get some hoof ratings from Zesty Gourmand so more guests could come in."

"That sounds very sad." Feather said.

"Of course, but it wasn't until my friend and I helped this other restaurant, The Tasty Treat, get more ponies to come in because their food was much better. Pretty soon, all the other restaurants disregarded Zesty's hoof ratings and served food the way they wanted."


Oh yeah I remember that especially that look-alike Gordon Ramsay although there was a pony who looks like him but it was something

Well, this chapter took an unexpected dark turn... but they ended it happy! :heart: :raritywink:

"I just want to apologize again for not having enough bits for dinner. I usually eat at small diners or local restaurants and their food weren't that pricey." Feather said with an awkward grin.

Oh I know how that feels feather I never really eat one of those fancy restaurants too rich for my taste Plus I don't have that kind of money 😅

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What part of the chapter was dark?

Well this was a pretty cute chapter so feather Bang is going out with Rarity and even though this was not what size are being expected to go but he does have a good heart even though he likes to show off but he's still a good guy and Rarity can see the generosity in him once again this was a really good story I wonder who's next

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Well, maybe "dark" was too far on my part, but I was talking about the injury portion.

I was short on other words to describe it...

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Oh, okay. I was just wondering

Rarity would be my first choice to date out the mane 6, though I think a gentle pony gesture of pulling out the chair for her would be a good move.

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Do you know what punctuation is?

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No what does that mean

What's with all the dislikes on this story? Don't get it at all.

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I guess most people don't like a story about Feather Bangs dating any of the Main Six.

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Any idea where that stems from?

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I have no idea. It can be something similar to Flash Sentry. Some people like him and support him being shipped with Twilight while others don't.

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Possibly.

I thought of this in the meantime: maybe because there are three mares who are canonically interested in Feather Bangs, the idea of him dating the Mane Six sounds "wrong" to them. Which I won't harp on them for, plenty of fanfiction plots that have been used don't appeal to me, and they might not for you either. Just preferences.

Where I get confused is why would you put a thumbs-down a story when you already know you won't be interested. That just doesn't make sense to me.

"Or here!" A third Pinkie popped up another spot. Feather then saw a lot more Pinkies appear all around him. Feather's heart raced as he had no idea which one is the real Pinkie and how he should get out of here.

Trust me feather as long as it's not the mirror pool situation you'll be okay bro lol

"It's alright, at least I'm not hurt." Feather then looked at the multiple mirrors. "Although, it would've been really scary to be with so many copies of you, Pinkie."

You have no idea

"Woo! That was a close one!" The other Pinkie said as she didn't want to get caught by her original self. As Pinkie and Feather left the fun house, they looked around to find more things to do at the carnival. Pinkie gasped and grabbed Feather by the head.

Gasp it's the Pinkie Pie clone that got away at least the first clone there's some theories about that one

Well looks like the date with Pinkie Pie went pretty well especially she can be a little crazy but they had a very good time and it's really sweet that Pinkie Pie helps him out to not feel so down this was a pretty good chapter and pretty fun one as well I wonder who's next

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Did you also spot the Pony Life reference?

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Oh really I didn't know that what is the name of the episode so I can check it out

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Pony Life is that MLP spinoff where the Main Six look like chibi versions of themselves. The chibi version of Pinkie on her reflection was a reference to that show.

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Oh yeah now I remember that it's just I'm just thinking about Pinkie Pie clone lol

Pinkie Pie driving bumper cars; yeah, I can guess how that would turn out.

Some constructive criticism I have, specifically with this:

"Hiya, cutie! Why are you so down in the dumps?" The pink mare asked Feather.

"Umm, what?" Feather responded in confusion.

"I sensed that somepony was feeling sad and I ended up finding you." The pink mare explained. "Why are you sad when you're at a carnival? It's a wonderful place to be in!"

"I came here to look for some mares to hang out with. The only problem is that mares here don't want to hang out with me." Feather answered. The pink mare gasped and appeared next to Feather.

"Wait a minute! I'm a mare! Do you want to hang out with me?" The pink mare looked at Feather with excitement on her face.

"I'm not sure," Feather said while rubbing his manes.

"Ah, come on! I won't bite." The pink mare said while leaning over to Feather and giving him a suggestive wink. Feather took a moment to think over the pink mare's offer. He wasn't sure about the pink mare as there was something strange about her. Feather then realized that this was what he was looking for and decided to take his chances.

"Alright, I accept your offer." Feather got concerned when he saw that the pink mare was suddenly shaking as if she was about to blow.

"Yippie!" The pink mare hollered in excitement while jumping up in the air. "We're gonna have so much fun!" The pink mare said as she took Feather by the hoof and dragged him to another part of the carnival. "I know where we can ride some exciting rides!" The pink mare suddenly stopped from where she was and it caused Feather to bump into her. "Oh! I almost forgot! My name is Pinkie Pie!" The pink mare said as she turned to Feather. "What's your name?"

I feel this contains too many uses of "pink mare." To make it clear, I'm not calling you out for "lavender unicorn syndrome"; I've never had a problem with using a pony's coat color in placement of their name, and I understand why it was used here. Feather didn't know Pinkie's name yet.

But, with that said, I still don't think "the pink mare" needed to appear that many times. A few times makes sense, but "the mare" could have sufficed for plenty of the uses; with Feather Bangs being a stallion and the conversation not featuring any other ponies besides him and Pinkie, there wouldn't have been ambiguity.

Overall, I really liked this chapter and am still liking this story! The use of a carnival as the setting was great and a perfect fit for Pinkie!

Well it looks like the date turned out pretty well I mean not what he expected so Applejack and feather went on their date she showed and the activities they do in the Farm but so far he's been failing a couple of times which pretty embarrassing for him but in the end of the day they look like they were having fun and Applejack even show him the Apple field which I can imagine looks pretty cool so but that's saying does only one left and I think we all know who that would be can't wait

Only one chapter left! Tune in next time for when Feather goes on a date with the Princess of Friendship

No pressure feather bang 😅 ( normally I ship Twilight with Flash Sentry but I do like to say how this will work out )

Wow, there's way too much in this chapter for me to praise the things I liked one-by-one!

(That's another way of saying this chapter was very good the whole way through) :twilightsmile:

"Oh, how about over there?" Twine suggested while pointing at a tent with a crystal ball on the sign.

"Fortune telling?" Feather responded.

"Yeah! The pony inside tells us what our fortune is! It sounds really exciting!" Twine said

To be honest I thought Pinkie Pie was going to be there because didn't she became a fortune teller and season 2 even though that's only one time lol

So this is like a medieval Festival going on cool I like that anyway so feather went to the festival and accidentally bump into a unknown female unicorn but her name twine shine so they both have a great time in the festival and looks like they were having some special bond with each other until she had to leave what's that kind of leaves sound pretty depressed poor guy but then when the jousting was ended feather was escort to meet Princess Twilight Sparkle which unknowns to him it's actually his date so apparently Twilight was in disguise so she can check out the Medieval Festival without any ponies recognizing her and she looks like she was having fun with him this was a pretty fun story of seeing how feather bang go out with the main 6 storys keep up the good work and wonder we are going to see more feather bang stories lol

Are you going to make a clop version of this series?

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You mean, Feather Bangs Bangs the Mane Six?

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Well, both Feather and Flash are voiced by the same guy

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