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Ever since Grogar brought Tirek, Cozy Glow, and Queen Chrysalis together, they haven't spent a lot of time doing evil like they wanted. In fact, Grogar mostly has them hanging out in a cave underground. With the boredom that comes with it, the three of them have to find ways to pass the time.
Written for the Cozy Glow contest.
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I could literally feel their boredom oozing out of the story, and it almost made me feel sorry for them.
...almost.
Aww, the three villains bonding over their hatred<3
I love short fics like this about them just hanging around.
Disturbingly sweet.
Tirek calling Chrysalis ‘Chryssie’ and ‘cockroach’ in the same minute afkalsmkf
Love it! Thimblewhacker sounds pretty brutal, though...
Cute story. I love how darkly amusing Chrysalis’s game was. It actually reminds me of a game from the Harry Potter series, where players on broomsticks fly around a pitch full of falling boulders and catch them in cauldrons tied on top of their heads.
Discord’s reaction was perfect. Perhaps with Twilight aware of this, they could start sending the three on “missions” to teach them about friendship as part of a reformation project. Any sequel plans?
I’d like to hear more about this backup plan...
I rather liked the Thimblethwacker song...
Loved the imagery in this. Chrysalis bouncing up and down like a little kid and singing silly songs is something that puts a smile on my face, as is the image of Discord's face at the thought of playing "Thimblethwacker" (as he might say "priceless"). Also I really enjoyed your Cozy Glow. I don't know how much of her was exaggerated, but I loved every bit of it.
Are you sure this was meant to be a Chrysalis line? Seems more like something your Cozy Glow might say.
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It was Cozy's line. Fixed to make it clearer.
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No sequel plans as such.
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Thanks!
And I do mean what I said in my earlier comment. This is actually one of the more balanced and believable takes on Cozy I've yet seen. Which is kind of odd given that it's a comedy, and yet still deeply hilarious.
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Well I would hope that a comedy is deeply hilarious.
Love it
Chryssie knows all the best games.
Pretty entertaining, though I feel like like Tirek was portrayed a little dumber than his canon self, though that might just be me.
pretty good
My first impression was that it was one of Fluttershy, and I think it would have been better if it was. Discord knows they want him dead, and it's whatever, I doubt he would have cared much. But them pretending to hurt Fluttershy? That would have set him off.
Still, fun villain antics