(Tagged AU due to conflicting information involving Starlight Glimmer as the mother of Luster Dawn.)
Luster Dawn has settled into life in Ponyville pretty easily and has even begun to make some friends. It helps that her mother is finally giving her space to be her own pony.
However, when Luster is told she'll have to give a progress report, she finds out it'll fall on the same day Queen Twilight is coming to Ponyville to celebrate an important anniversary: The first encounter with her friends.
Will Luster be able to get everything together in time for Twilight's arrival? And what will Starlight Glimmer have to say about her own daughter's decisions?
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Helo I like your story
Excellent job on this one-shot. Absolutely adored the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up. I LOVED your explanation for Twilight's appearance in "the Last Problem" (DEFINITELY makes sense) as well as Starlight seeing the writing on the wall well enough to contact Twilight at the first signs of Luster getting nervous about a supposed deadline, the gang reflecting on how much their lives have changed over the last couple of decades (and I suppose another AU detail is the allusion to the Cutie Mark Crusaders [since Li`l Cheese already had his Cutie Mark in the Last Problem]) and Twilight reassuring Luster that knowing that she was taking her new friendships seriously was more than good enough.
Certainly looking forward to seeing what you have lined up for your future works.
Twilight blushed as she lit up her horn, her large body shrinking down to one that was about the same size as Starlight's and had a few gray locks forming under her bangs and pink skunk stripe.
Whoa she can do that wow thats some strong magic
Wow very nice man there was another story I read about luster being the daughter of starlight but anyway luster is panicking about this whole friendship report sounds like Twilight and starlight as they say lol but twilight reassure to Lustre that she didn't need to do that all the time as long as she knows how friendship is I think she would be okay this was a pretty good story
Happy 10th anniversary mlpfim
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Luster does look like Starlight and Sunburst's daughter, I agree. But still. Does help that this is an AU. But if people bother to actually think about it, it doesn't add up that she is.
11100673 I believe it was Jim Miller who said he wanted to make Luster Dawn Starlight's daughter (no word on who the father would've been), but Josh Haber (who wrote "The Last Problem") rejected the idea and Luster Dawn's parentage was never eluded to.
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Problem is, that Luster being Starlight's daughter makes no sense when you actually bother to think about it. This being a rebellious phase of her life, hence her views on friendship could make sense.
But that falls apart when, if she was Starlight's daughter, she would know all about how Twilight and the girls get together as they do. Or that Twilight would react as she did. But she reacted as if this was all brand new to her. Not something she'd known of for years.
11100686 Exactly, and I think that's the contradiction Haber pointed out when rejecting the idea.
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Hi, yea I'm new.
I saw this little conversation and I had something that might interest this discussion going on. I don't know it y'all have seen this, or are talking without watching it, but either way, I decided to pop it in here, just to add a little flavour
And as for this story itself; I wubed it.
I was wondering if I'd ever get around to reading something to do with Luster here, and hadn't until now. Real glad this was my first look into her stuff. Happy to have given this a read