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Saiyan of the North Star


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That's why it's not why it's go out drinking you mint wake up married

:applejackconfused: ................. ok. calling it now. somewhere down the line we are getting a 'sam and max' cameo in some way. so i'm calling it now.

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True, BUT at least Flash got THREE VERY HOT, HUGE BREASTED Wives. :heart: :duck: :raritystarry: And all are in a happy relationship.

This was a fun and interesting beginning, I hope Roger and Fluttershy get together and maybe more.

Pretty nice start, curious on what happens next

Minor question, did Spike got to go to the nightclub too?
Did like how he's allowed in the Cake's place due to them letting dogs allowed. It just gets annoying how Spike often gets left out in EQG due to he's stuck as a dog such as the whole "no pets allowed" bs some places have.

Wow... a Las Vegas marriage. Yup... that turned out very well... for Flash at least. And here i thought these kids knew better.
Oh well, it's one heck of a setup for sure. Not really sure how to feel about Jessica Rabbit though. Though we may find out in the next chapter!
Keep it up and take my like and follow! :ajsmug:

awesome chapter cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

nice to know this is getting worked on.

Is Spike going to be part of the team too?
Since that cruise from Spring Breakdown was brought up, would he be pretty upset that he missed out on it due to the fact he missed out big time? Like how the girls got to go to Equestria while Sci-Twi got to meet her Equestrian counterpart(for the second time). I hated how that special didn't have Spike get to be on the trip for no explanation and missed out on getting to meet his Equestrian counterpart big time.

I hope for sober sex scenes. I have no care if flash is involved, i just want to see tig ol' bitties.

Also based on my knowledge of cup size designations, i realized the following near instantly.

Rarity is smallest of the big Rainboob gang.

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KO ironically, Rarity likes it because F is for Fashion!

This was a fun and epic lore chapter.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Anatomy lesson:

The white of the human eye is the scelra.
The ring of color between it and the black dot is known as the iris.
The black dot is simply known as the pupil.
Therefore calling them all black pupils is redundant, unnecessary and only serves to pad out the word count of the chapter despite it being well over 2,000.

In short, you need to learn human biology.

Otherwise good chapter.

Is Spike truly part of the Equestrian Detectives too? Like really part of them?


Interesting on how characters like Rigby from Regular Show is there, what other cartoons you would involve here?

huh. strange stuff going on with blue. what is up with a blue worm??

Well well well. Looks like our first antagonist is a hypnotized Wallflower.
Or maybe a bunch of blue worms.
Either way it'll be exciting.

Wonder how many people there were brainwashed the Blue Mind Worms there?


Where's Spike during this?

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Dude. I don't think NOT every story that "Saiyan of the North Star" has, will not involve Spike at all, or something like that.

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I am just asking though...

Spike was with them in a previous chapter but nowhere to be seen now for some reason.

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The author has the answer to that. Not to me, nor the other commenters know?

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I was asking the author though when I asked that question there.

awesome chapter keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Well that is a pretty good way to end the case.
But really disappointing Spike missed out on it. Why wasn't he there for this first magical case? Isn't he part of the group too?


If I may ask, wonder what if instead of every 4 months it could be like in every new month you could take a week to update your MLP stories on here? I don't want to sound rude or anything but just wanting to give out a suggestion and such.
I am still curious on how are you able to handle working on over a 100 fics. That is really impressive that they are still going via a pretty consistent schedule(updating one story per day I mean)

A nice chapter there.

Wonder how will this case goes?

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Pretty great chapter.
Loved that Spike got to help here.

Wonder if there's some mastermind causing incidents given how it sees someone helped that gremlin cause trouble?

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

hmmmmmmmm. seems like this case will shade the gang in mystery.

Curious on how that case will go.


Those flashlight-sunglasses Spike noticed surely look crucial.

wesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

so .... how soon will we find out that sunset is pregnant?

Pretty good chapter.

Liked that Spike was good help in catching the Trouble Shadow with those shades he found

Pretty nice Halloween chapter


Happy Halloween

A halloween chapter? Didn't see that one coming.
Dope.:pinkiehappy:

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