Spike was a normal boy playing his favorite video game at home and sometime wishes that he could live a life that is just like his fantasy game, it came true in the most unexpected way and became the Emerald Dragon Lord of a new world after be summon
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Can't wait to see who are the corrupt church followers and the Feudal Lord is.
Not bad, Still needs a run through with an editor though.
This is good. *Smiles* Keep going North Star.
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KO thanks!
i dont get you ppl why do you keep giving the girls enormous breasts sizes ? F cup? whats next double XX cup? thats just stupid
YES!!! AH YES!!! I'm loving this story even more!!!
So good. I am absolutely loving this Fanfiction. Very well done
Live Long, Have Fun, And Never Make Sense
Because
What Fun Is There In Making Sense?
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KO thanks!
You forgot to say that Rarity has a horn. Other than that, this fic is awesome. I love How NOT To Summon a Demon Lord and I can't wait to see how you fit the MLP characters into it. It is interesting that Medios is in Sugar Cube Corner instead of the slave business.
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you're very welcome
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Does that mean the rest of them will be reflected collared by him?
This is a fun meet up with Them Rarity I can't wait to meet the others and the CMC.
This story is getting more and more interesting. I just hope when Spike gets a new weapon, he doesn't get a scythe. I'm hopping that he gets a great sword like the dragon slayer sword from berserk. Now that is one hell of a badass sword.
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KO nope, they weren’t at the pillar like Twilight, Sunset, and Pinkie.
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hey no kink shaming here, some people like big breasts and others like them small...
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kink shames with little regard for everybody else
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shhh! :D
Looks like Rarity has the most modest bust, so far, and seems to be a bit friendly. Noticed some missing words in this one too, nothing too distracting though.
When I write bust sizes, I try to at least be able to offer a reasonable explanation for the bust sizes. Granted, I have a little set of rules I made for myself regarding character breast sizing, alicorns always get the biggest busts though, it's only fair.
Story looks good overall so far. However, I've noticed some tense shifting in the narrative text that you may want to look over and address, or ask a friend to help spot. A second pair of eyes never hurts.
I love this, I read the mlp hschool dxd crossover and thought of how not to summon a demonlord and wished for a crossover and now its here. I give my thanks for writing this.
Looking good so far. Let's see where this would lead us to.