This should be fun!

this will be fun. i can jest see it now. even the 'lemon' scenes.

This should be fun to read

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Welcome, also I a fan of How NOT to summon a Demon Lord. That was a fun anime to watch

its way too much of a coincidence that im watching ISEKAI MAOU TO SHOUKAN SHOUJO NO DOREI MAJUTSU right now ...

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*eating some popcorn* this is going to be good also *points to the multiple popcorn stands* i have popcorn stands set up one stand per popcorn flavor to save time

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I'd like a large bucket, please.

The anime is definitely a guilty pleasure of mine. Hope Spike can avoid some of Diablos' awkward social pitfalls. :b

awesome keep it up cant wait for next chapter

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Ooooo, a Spike harem story.
Lovely! Can't wait to see which girls Spike will get.

Wonder how things go when Luna pops up?

I enjoyed the show, once this is further along or finished I will give it a read, looking forward to it.

You have my attention. I will be keeping an eye on this story.

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Loving this! Awesome chapter! And I'm glad you made a crossover of MLP and How NOT To Summon A Demon Lord which is one of my favorite anime. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

Hmm... I should be looking forward at this.

Right out of the gate awsome start and its made better for me because i have seen the anime, so i look forward for more.

I litterally had a similar idea not long ago. I got it from my friend showing me some clips last week, hats funny..

I like it, hope you show the might of a real dragonlord in future chapter's

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WHERE THE FUCK HAVE YOU BEEN ALL LIFE YOU BEAUTIFUL,SEXY STORY YOU😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻

I am loving this story so far and can't wait to see where this goes next ( on rush).

"Behold Mortals! For I am not a mere dragon or lizard,
I AM DRAGON LORD RYU!!!"
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Let us see where this show goes, can't wait for more.

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help yourself there is even a drink stand *points to said drink stand*

That White Nove must be a Green/Purple Nova

Yes just yes

I have seen the anime which one of these three have this world of the Demon Lord trapped inside of them

Nice start, ill be watching how this unfolds.

if you need help editing i m here to help and...
that was awesome !

Nice Fanfiction love the crossover, beautifully exacuted can't wait for the next chapter. Of course it does beg the question which one holds the soul. And which villain is it. Chrysalis?, Discord's?, Tirek?, Or Sombra?. Then again it could be Ember since your using Dragon Lord instead of Demon Lords

Live Long, Have Fun, and Never Make Sense
Because
What Fun Is There In Making Sense?

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I was hoping for someone to do an adaptation of this anime to Fimfiction.com, chapter 1 is a masterpiece BTW.

HOPE MORE IS ONE THE WAY

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It is on!

First chapter... a huge success

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I good start, but I noticed some slight errors, mostly missing or misspelled words peppered in a few places.

Also, I would like to point out the bust sizes you gave all girls are considerably large, like hanging a down and out a bit more than most people would think.

While I do enjoy the way the story looks, and it is a well written chapter...I see a rather common error that happens quite often in regards to stories like this:
Describing a girl's bust in terms of the cup size.
Cup size for breasts is relative to the rest of the girls figure, and - as I understand it - is a description of the shape of the curve. This doesn't actually tell the reader anything about the actual bust size, especially if we don't know how the girl is built. (For example, a J cup on a skinny girl will be smaller than one on a girl with wider shoulders and torso.) Not only that, it isn't really feasible to identify cup size by sight...unless you happen to be a professional with undergarments.
I'd personally recommend describing it in terms of fruit, or other similar objects, which will give a better sense of the size of the girls' busts (if that's a detail important enough to focus on like such).
Not a huge detraction from the story, but a minor pet peeve I've developed over time, and I thought I'd offer my perspective and advice in that regard.

How tall is spike compared to the girls?

The first one called Pinkie has really puffy pink hair tied in a ponytail with two blue brands, like cotton candy and light-blue eyes. She wears a blue and pink dress with the skirt part looking all round and puffy with purple streamers around the waist and pale-yellow heart with three pink balloons, yellow gloves, white-blue high heels with some yellow designs. She also has pony ears too. Breasts sizes: J-cup.

TOO DISCRIPTIVE
I hate it when stories do this
I mean we already know who they are you dont have to go full blown explanation to a person who has never heard of MLP

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i feel like this is justified, as its a anthro version, which mos5 od the times includes clothes, unlike the pony versions