(Takes place after IDW Main Series #81. Slight spoilers for those who haven't read it.)
Inspired by a Wonderbolt from long ago, Rumble was able to build his own glider to use in a Wonderbolts show. Now he and Scootaloo face the challenge of fine tuning it to be more airworthy.
Naturally, the two pegasi find themselves chatting about familiar subjects as they work on perfecting the design. Things that concern both of them about what life has in store.
Can the two friends duplicate their success and get the glider to work more reliably?
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The dialogue feels a bit hurried. Maybe break up the dialogue with descriptions of their facial expressions and body language in order to slow it down and give the reader a better idea of what Scootaloo and Rumble are feeling. Aside from that, it's a pretty good story. I like seeing this side of Scootaloo, and she and Rumble have good chemistry.
Very nice! Great job! What got you the idea for it?
Friendshipping? That's what they all say.
Downright adorable one-shot. :-D Absolutely LOVED how Scoots and Rumble interacted here. And, yeah, I could see this fitting in equally well in either the Main (comic) universe OR your "Stallion Six" series. The exchange, characterizations and general wrap-up were all quite well done.
Definitely looking forward to more of your work in general.
Oh yeah I forgot about that incident back in season 7 when he complained about this whole cutie mark problem
This was a nice story of the aftermath of the comic with scootaloo and Rumble