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Horndog


"Fine. I'll do it myself." -Horndog (the recently revived fetish-powered zombie resurected by the power of the mighty Model M), having run out of porn containing his specific fetishes.

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Well, I'm glad to see more of you. Somehow, the pool balls up the ass seems familiar. I feel like I've read it before, but I can't find it for the life of me. Keep up the good work, I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapter. Mare urethral just doesn't happen often enough.

Oh yeah, as for the story itself, anal beads are always a big turn on for me, though I never thought of them being used to go deeper like that. I suppose it makes sense. Really quite a hot thought though.

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pool balls up the ass seems familiar. I feel like I've read it before, but I can't find it for the life of me.

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Ah. I didn't realize that it was from The Son is Shining. That's one of my favorites, though I obviously haven't read it recently enough. Never heard of the other one though, I'll have to give it a shot.

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I've never read a pony story with shoving billiard balls up a mare's ass, though I haven't read every story on the site. I just thought the idea was hot and started writing. As for the mare urethral, I've got plans for that poor mare's tunnel, though she'll enjoy it thoroughly.

Anal beads are hot, and more of them is better, and bigger is better yet.

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I somehow missed both of those stories, though the second one is new enough I just might not have searched recently enough to find it. The first one is really good, though the description certainly sells it short. It also tries to hide the best part in an ending. Maybe I'm just a bit odd that way. Maybe some day I'll write that good.

I just can't get enough of this type of content! Much like your previous story its nice to see a writer who can appreciate how sexy anal can be both visually and physically. Especially when the said area has gotten quite a workout and it shows in all its swollen juicy glory. ;)


Favorite part has to be how sexually desperate Glimmer is in the story. That and all that kinky intestinal distortion/stomach bulge action with the pool balls. I mean its one thing to stick one, two, or maybe three balls in...but 16!!! That sort of thing borderlines the grotesque, and I absolutely love it!!! XD


There's something about the act of extreme anal that while many would begin to get turned off I personally see it almost like a challenge/display of commitment. Its almost like seeing a proffesional bodybuilder in their element where some onlookers are like "wow" and others are like "yikes". Either way you either appreciate it for what it is or you don't. But in this case I can totally appreciate this sort of thing.


Even more so for the fact that Glimmer is so into the whole thing along with the rest of the bar.


That and how despite the anal nature of the whole thing Glimmer actually takes the time to clean/sanitize the pool balls. Most stories would gloss right over it and personally the first thing I was thinking before she started putting the balls in was..."please clean those balls, who know what hooves have touched those things!". And this is coming from someone who can appreciate messy anal action at least in the fictional sense.


Anyways, totally enjoying the story and can't wait to see what you have in store for the second part. The first part was so intense that it feels like it will be hard to top!


But I hope you do and despite your concerns at the end of the story don't be afraid to elaborate. :)

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I love me an experienced ponut. You can always tell the ones that get enough love.

Fun Fact! Regulation Billiard Balls are 2.5 inches in diameter. That train was 40 inches deep in her, before Double Shot stuck his dick in.

Extreme anal is born of passion, someone doing something they truly love. It's one of the hottest things there is.

Pones just can't help being naturally kinky, it's in their nature.

All of my stories will be clean. It's very important. (And I'm a bit of a germophobe, so everything will always be magically or alchemically clean.)

As for Version B, the one rule of magically enhanced kinkfics is that you can always go farther. How much farther is a matter of perspective. To me, the next chapter isn't much heavier than this one, but to some people, it would be considered disgustingly extreme.

In terms of elaboration, things had to be dropped cause I was saving her ass for later, so I couldn't get that sweet DP in this chapter.

Reading it through I kept finding myself pausing to imagine all the sexy imagery through out the story.

Whether it was "comfortably smuggle multiple watermelons", or a "distinct lumpy bulge where her bladder was" or just a cock and balls filled with... well...balls. XD

There was just so many scenes to imagine and all of them were so hot and kinky!

The pool ball bladder insertion made me think a lot about unbirth to a degree but on a smaller scale. But still very graphic in all the best possible ways. Especially when it comes to seeing into Glimmers bladder through her gaping ruined urethra.

But still the best scene had to be the one with Glimmer and Double Shot pushing the pool balls out of her bladder/urethra down Double's own urethra. Its such a fun scene to imagine and you captured it nicely. :)

Great update and can't wait to see what you come up with next!

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Thank you. That actually means a lot to me. I work pretty hard to emphasize imagery, cause it's kinda the most important part of a clopfic. Admittedly, when I did the first editing pass, none of the interesting parts actually happened, so I'm glad I decided to go back and redo it.

As for what's coming next? I have no idea! I mean, I can hazard a few guesses, but it's anybody's guess as to which one of my upcoming stories I'll finish first. The only thing I can guarantee is that it's going to contain anal of some sort.

Comment posted by JulianWindfeather deleted Sep 20th, 2020

It's quite rare to find urethral or prostate content on fimfiction, but this some nice (If light) combination of both, I would love to see more of that from you with either males/shemales or futas.

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Well good news for you then, I have a fair amount on the way! As soon as I finish it.

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