...But there is one they fear. In their tongue his name is Dovahkiin... Dragonborn. First person story. Follow Daragon in his quest to defeat the evil dragon Alduin and end the civil war in Skyrim. Might keep adding tags. Enjoy.
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First:D
Edit: read it, it was pretty good, few mistakes from my eyes and I am looking toward to seeing where this ends up at, and I love the tobuscus reference
You may want to add an "Alternate Universe" tag, 'cause... well, you know... it's kinda an alternate universe?
I felt like you were rushing too much. Could you slow down the pace that the story is going in? It's kind of hard when one thing great happens but then 2 seconds later it's like 10 days past. I think this could be good if executed well. Hope you can improve this chapter. Thanks.
I liked it :D
Aaaaaaand... TOBUSCUS.
first, and it sounds to....rushed.. slow it down abit
1221637 STEPHEN! TICKETS!
Don't care. MOAR
i like the way you imply mlp to skyrim, but i think its a little too violent. ponies never do violent stuffs
1404506 i agree AH WANT MOAR
if u not so busy kind to work on it
I loved This, if nothing else then at least the first chapter.
Also... Do you mind if I implement a scene... Or two from this? I'm trying to write my own Skyrim/MLP crossover and I'm kind of running out of ideas and inspiration. It's nothing big really, and I would mention you in the author note.
First, I'd like to express how well you have balanced between the real storyline of Skyrim and your own, starting off with Applejack being a companion.
Then, to be honest I adore the combat scenes with all their details that make the fic *this* much better.
And for the last but not the least, I think Daragon sounds more like an Elven name, rather than a Nordic one.
Little too early for the romance. A good romance should be built up. And he was too eager to join the Legion. Not saying he should join the Stormcloaks, just saying.