Good thoughts are good. Bad thoughts are bad. They're misunderstood. Both make me glad.
I'm Chase, a twelve-year-old in juvenile, eating lunch with my friend Lily. Well, that's the last thing I remember before everything faded to black.
I don't know where I am.
I don't know what I am.
My ears still are still sensitive
But that's okay.
Lily's here too.
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Really good so far. Can't wait to find out what will happen next.
Fun story so far and I do find the premise interesting to see a 12 year old from Juve finding his way in Equestestria like that. I wonder what was the issues with his ears, is it because he is autistic maybe? And, what got him landed in there in the first place, to be violent enough to be warranted there, along with if it will also pressed as a pony?
There are a whole lot of "human turned pony in Equestria" stories, but this one does seem to have enough unique points to plausibly stand out if continued.
You have my attention
Especially
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Thank you. I double checked it, and found some more spelling errors. I need to read more closely.
I'm really liking this story so far. I hope we don't have to wait another couple weeks for a new chapter.
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I can stop making the pictures at the end if people agree, as they do take time as well.
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No, the pictures are a reason for this story's charm!
Interesting.
This is why you don't eat yourself, you taste like dirt.
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Uhh... whoops. Thanks for catching that.
I like them too, it's nice to be able to see who your reading about.
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Glad people like them, as I want to improve both my art and writing skills.
The pictures at the ends of the chapters are very cute. I’m enjoying it so far. Having over sensitive senses really does suck, at least he got those headphones at all
To quote the meme, "I mean, trees? Everywhere! Trees?!"
Hangry? Whats that, a new emotion?
I think you meant to write sighed here, as previously you’v Written in past sense, and now you changed all of a sudden
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It's when you're angry from the result of hunger.
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I don't think I need two past tense words in a single sentence. I hope I'm not wrong or anything. Thanks for the comments, anyway.
I really like the start you have here, the chapters seem nicely paced and the characters are nice/good/cute. Overall you really have something going here, despite the odd spelling mistake, I really hope you keep writing and good luck
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Huh, I did not know that. Well, as they say, learn something new every day.
Very interesting so far. Hope it continues.
a rat, realy lily xD looks adorable tho ^^
nice good story so far. looking forward to read some more ^^
This story thus far has been really quite cute. I'm glad I read it.
Hey, nice fic you have here!
My drama teacher used to call those "hear-muffs".
I really like the story can’t wait for more!