Fluttershy is many things: Animal caretaker, Element of Kindness, and even best friends with a Wonderbolt. But even with everything that she had done and all the things she had achieved, there was still something on her mind.
Maybe it had been all of the times that she had seen her shows. Maybe it was because of how good a flier she was. Maybe it was because of how brave she was willing to be in front of audiences of potential thousands. But whatever it was, Fluttershy had one thing on her mind. She couldn't bear the thought of Rainbow Dash flying alone with the Wonderbolts.
So, whether she was crazy or just really, really determined, she was going to join the Wonderbolts.
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interesting concept, you've got my attention
though i will admit that(at least to me) there are some slight, vague twinges of FlutterDash that i'm not too fond of
Hmm, very interesting. I'll be willing to see how good Fluttershy will do as a Wonderbolt. We have a powerful potential in out youth, and we must have the courage to change old ideas and practices so that we may direct their power toward good ends.
Also, I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. For success, the author must make the reader care about the destiny of the principals, and sustain this anxiety, or suspense, for about 100,000 words. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Say what? Communicating with animals is kind of Fluttershy's thing.
Still, it'll be amusing to see how Fluttershy deals with Spitfire shouting in her face.
Fluttershy is doing pretty good as a Wonderbolt recruit and passed her five hundred laps. I hope she'll manage to try out the Dizzitron. Be bold, be brave enough to be your true self.
So far so good, Fluttershy. But will you be able to make it all the way through to the end?
You got this Flutters!
Interesting...
If Fluttershy is going to pass the Dizzitron then my answer is that she'll have to gather all the courage inside herself in order to make a smooth landing without any dizziness. True courage is a result of reasoning. A brave mind is always impregnable.
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The Dizzitron would certainly be well beyond anything she's ever experienced. Though after the level of improvement she had made over the course of "Hurricane Fluttershy", her rising to that challenge would not be particularly implausible.
Though this story has me curious about the Wonderbolts' admission standards. The opening of "Wonderbolts Academy" implied that there one had to meet actual standards to attend the academy, but then when Spitfire orders everypony to do 500 laps, we see Bulk Biceps struggling to take off. Either their admissions standards are far lower than had been previously implied, or Spitfire thought it would be amusing to see him try.
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I see you make your point. It will be very impressive for Fluttershy to see how fast she's going to do.
Hey, ShadowMane PX-41 I'm so hooked with your Flutter-Bolt story. I'll be hoping to see more of your upcoming chapters and remember: Believe in yourself, be persistent, and don't let anyone break your confidence.