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Okay, yeah. This is so fucking stupid in literally every way that I don't know why you thought this was a good idea in the first place. And it's not even getting Gallus and Silverstream together that's the problem.
It's that you made Silverstream, one of the nicest of the new characters, into a complete and utter asshole to get the two together at all.
Yes, she's not the smartest one around, or even of the Young Six. But this is taking that way past acceptable. The AU tag can't save this.
No I'm not sorry about the language. But there are better ways to get these two together, even using Gallus had just broken up with Smolder, that would make this better.
This story being born onto this planet:
Literally probably not everyone but around 20% 2/3 of readers reactions
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I'm going off the tottaly accurate like to dislike ratio but heck the AU tag is definally being pushed quite "a bit" with Silverstream.
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-----:The bold part of the comment has been downsized because it was too big.
-------:Also who the heck dropped their own dislikes on me I'm trying to have fun here :p
not sure what to think of this.
10388655
Then write it yourself instead of flaming the writer. Instead of providing any real criticism other than "grrr I mad, I no like"
Edit: Cool, keep them downvotes coming for me saying something reasonable and trying to point how how someone is being toxic and unhelpful and saying if they don't like it then they can write something they like themselves.
10389136
Because he provided legitimate criticism. And it was even constructive criticism even though the language used was excessively harsh and rude and worthy of a downvote because of it.
And the "write it yourself" counter to any criticism only demonstrates that you don't care that the criticism is legit and that no one should be criticized. Which is unreasonable.
So stating it wasn't real criticism and the "write it yourself" is why you are downvoted.
10389330
The downvotes mean absolutely nothing to me, and I'm not one to filter an opinion so the language can be harsh. But if the story is bad enough, then I'll say how I feel.
If it becomes a site rule that you can't curse, then I'll stop. But only because it's a site rule, nothing else.
10389330
What is the Criticism then? Do explain how any of it was criticism and not just biased distaste for something and how it provided any form of help to the writer and not just "Grrrr I mad, I no like."
Also since you don't seem to know what the definition of Criticism is, I'll leave it here.
A.
Which is only flaming because they don't like the story, doesn't provide any criticism. Just distaste and dislike and nothing to points to actual faults or mistakes. Just a biased dislike for the story.
or was it
B.
Which is just complaints towards seeing a character in a way they disapprove of and seem to forgot that countless others make characters act in a way to fit the story.
Or maybe
C.
Once again, flaming with no actual input to critic the story but just shower it with disapproval.
Or maybe
D.
Nothing helpful provided, just pushing what they want and expect from someone else because the story isn't what THEY want.
10389430
No, what you did wasn't helpful it was flaming which is something that can be reported so mind your manners. If you're gonna give critic, actually give critic not some brony anger pitch that shows your dislike for something but provides no real feedback or help other than "I dont like this"
Me coming back to see the comment section in the last 17 hours:
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In my opinion, I don’t see why this story is downvoted. It is short but it gets the point, there is no need for more words or actions.
10392490
Probably because Silverstream is so out of character in this story for laughing at Gallus like she does. Something the real Silverstream would never do. Or even think about doing.
The AU tag can only work to justify so much. It didn't work with this story. That could be one reason.
Also the fact that this is porn, and people downvote just based on those tags.
10426252
So it is a false expectative vs reality?
10429692
No its just biased hate because he flamed another and when called out and asked to point out what any he said before was critique he never responded and got promptly shut up. Which can be seen down below in the comments and got very toxic overall instead of providing meaningful critique
10447902
Thank you for making it more obvious, I could not tell without proper context.
That’s it? That was one paragraph of the actual sex. We don’t get any description of how it feels, no insight into the emotions of the characters no real feel for the amount of time.
This story is based around the sex he has with silverstream, and it’s just over in a couple sentences.
Hell I probably spent more effort writing this comment then you did the actual sexual encounter.
The entire story is setup with basically no payoff. Which makes the entire story pointless.
If I had to describe this story in a few words, I’d say it’s basically on par with most watpad smut fics. That’s not a compliment.
Smolder got big standards
Silverstream tells a joke
Gallus Rapes Silverstream
She likes it they fuck again
The End