Job was as good of a Christian as any high school junior could be. He attended church on Sundays, he read the Bible, he avoided drugs and sex, and he participated in his church’s youth group regularly. So when his youth minister asked him about doing some volunteer work at the nearby New Foal Institution, he jumped on board, although with a few hesitations.
I’m not really into TCB, but this idea refused to leave my head. Man, I wish I didn’t flub publishing this. Then again, what is done can’t be undone. Although I consider this a complete story, I might add a chapter or two every once in a while.
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Hmm what does TCB mean?
Sick story bruh
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The Conversion Bureau.
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I really enjoyed this story, I never thought about the potion having negative effects on natural ponies. It leaves a lot of terrifying ideas to be explored, makes me wonder if Equestrian soldiers started to suffer its I’ll effects during the war, thus lowering their effectiveness. Also, they mention Equestria was bombed, which makes me curious if it was a traditional bombing campaign or… if the country was reduced to a radioactive wasteland. Still seeing some of my favorite mares suffering because of the war makes me wanna give them all a hug, especially Rainbow who seems to be dealing with a lot of guilt on top of her illness. It seems Job has developed a soft spot for her too, which warms my heart.
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Thanks, even though this is one of my more overlooked stories, I’m glad someone paid attention to it. Maybe I’ll develop some of the ideas in the future, although I wouldn’t mind if someone else ran with them instead.