• Member Since 3rd Feb, 2017
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phantom ghost hunter


I like many different stories by the way boo timber light yay flashlight.

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Flash is a real cool guy although his family life is hard but his friend has a new invention that will be revolutionary (story starts in 1985)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Look, is it okay if I skip this story? I don't know enough about Back to the Future to feel invested. Sorry about that.

10385794
I don't mind just leave a like on it okay.

10386684
Well do you want me to go back and edit the skate board thing into it just note I cant put the song in there.

Okay, this is the same problem every single one of your stories has. Not only is the chapter filled with typos, you rush through the whole thing way too quickly. It is like you skip over all the details just to get right to the end, with no buildup or proper development. You need more details, and stop rushing through everything.

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Okay if you say so just note that if I do updates will be slower.

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