The Feather

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It's Rainbow Dash and Applejack's first wedding anniversary, and Rainbow's set up a whole celebration! Something can possibly go wrong!

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frenettek314

frenettek314 #1 · Aug 12th, 2020 · 8 · ·

Amazing narration and characterization!

Fable Caster

Fable Caster #2 · Aug 12th, 2020 · 10 · ·

This was really well written. I absolutely loved some of the phrasing used!

Particularly this one:

And then, in accordance with the strict laws of cartoons involving feathers and noses, she sneezed.

Had me absolutely roaring in laughter. I'm sure my neighbors appreciated that.

TCC56

TCC56 #3 · Aug 12th, 2020 · 3 · ·

I love this. Simple and understated, but still a touching little look into their lives that implies a lot.

Waypoint

Waypoint #4 · Aug 12th, 2020 · 4 · ·

Fun story! I definitely liked the emotional beats and the way you described each of the scenes.

I admit, I was a bit surprised by the ending, but I think it still fits overall. Keep up the good work!

dr-soviet

dr-soviet #5 · Aug 12th, 2020 · 3 · ·

Yup, warm and fuzzy feelings

Aside from that, it's really well-written and I enjoyed every second!

Perpetually Confused

Perpetually Confused #6 · Aug 12th, 2020 · 1 · ·

"Wait... Why am pissed again? I mean, you literally grow them. Granny just nagged you the other night for getting them, like, everywhere?"

"Giving me a reason to use my tongue well enough to make a vegan eat a wild pregnant she boar ass first?"

"Oh yeah."

Comment posted by Ahzidal deleted Aug 13th, 2020

Ahzidal

Ahzidal #8 · Aug 13th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Winona might as well have buried Rainbow in the ground, what with how boned she was.

You psycho, you absolute madman, you actually managed to make an acceptable pun. Bravo sir, bravo. 👏👏👏

LunaTheFox

LunaTheFox #9 · Aug 13th, 2020 · 6 · ·

Can I just say how much I loved this? Because I did. So, so much. I loved the way Dash was so head-over-hooves in love during the wedding, I loved that AJ was offended at being offered a chance to preen, I loved that she was super careful the first time, I loved that Rainbow owned up to her mistakes, I loved all the ridiculous puns, and... I just loved it, okay? This is one hell of a warm and fuzzy story.