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Damn this was a good one
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Aww, nice to hear I satisfied!
I like your stories overall, but I gotta admit that I'm often confused as to what is happening, who is doing what, and where in the sequence of events we are at. Also there's a lot of errors sprinkled around, not even spelling mistakes at times, more like whole words missing or in the wrong place.
10382784
My apologies, for those oversights on my part, Armadillo. I... well, I'd been stuck in the middle of a production frenzy, mainly made because I felt I owed all that I was to belive like you, and I was trying os desperately to match your output because I couldn't match the follower count. And because of it... well, the work suffered, as you so plainly saw.
But thanks to some good people on Discord, I've... realized I can honor your good work without losing my own in the process. And to that end, I've seriously re-aligned my purpose. So this time, I've thoroughly revised my story, at least enough to make it legible. And take out those pesky sentence fragments.
Thank you for looking out for me, Armadilloeater.
The sex, and maybe the whole idea that something you plan goes wrong and you get hard sex.
Oddly one one part had any bondage in it.
That's when Princess Twilight came in.
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Eh, it happens sometimes. Well, all the time in this section of the F.A.O. Battlestation's holodecks.
And really, what better way to show the evolution of a magic-hungry manifest than by making her a beast in bed too?
10384566
Well then.
I best keep an eye on this deck, here's hoping you do more sexy stories soon.
maybe a continuation of this? Rarity and Sunset seem to be a good start....or maybe Luna/another student.
but then again.....aside from the Twilight's Midnight wasn't fully back....but she may have left some....taint inside Sci-Twi?
and there's the fact the other two have the possibility of becoming mothers at this rate.
Sex and good hard sex
This was awesome hope there's a sequel .
nice work.
10390016
Just the way the Principal likes it!
10412712
Thank you!
Very overdone, especially when it comes to over-the-top descriptions. Occasionally hard to follow it and understand what’s going on. And marred by a few nasty typos.
But still such a delightfully raunchy read that it was very enjoyable!