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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry Chronicles: War of the Lost City


A new series of adventures will begin as Flash and Twilight learn to grow into their new roles as teachers. They and their friends will now find themselves in even more crazy adventures than ever before, but can they handle them?

Edited by KingJoltik

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Twilight nodded back. "Yes. You see, I found out that that's where the first pony you ever cared about lives!"

Starlight 'Um, my mom is dead.'

"Yeah!" Spike added with a nod, "Considering how close you used to be, I figure you'd want to see him really bad." Soul rolled her eyes, muttering the word 'boys' under her breath.

Given her isolation for so long, why would she have the same prejudices in that regards.

Flash, Twilight, Heart, Soul, Spike, Starlight, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie, and the CMC

Unless you're gonna do sometime meaningful with the CMC you're adding characters you don't need and unless your gonna do something meaningful with AJ, RD, Rares, Flutters and Pinkie, you got five canonically present but ultimately useless characters you don't need

Hiveena

I am really hoping that she backstabs the heroes... I have a really hard buying into her 'reformation' also she really takes away from the uniqueness of Thorax

(after finishing PT1).... :ajbemused:...You really didn't need RD, AJ, Rares, Pinkie, Flutters, the CMC, Soul or Heart once Twilight got the inviation, as everything stands thus far, you have 10 characters you don't need that will for the most part go under utilize. (There's a reason why I cut AJ, RD, Rares, Flutters and Pinkie from my own take, they were utterly unnecessary in the Season 6 opener)

10435167 They might not have been necessary, but they still needed to be there. The Crystaling is basically a Christening and I don't know how that happens in your country but in mine lots of friends and family show up for that. Your argument is invalid.

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They are narratively under utilized, they served no purpose in the story once Twilight got the invitation. Regardless if this is like a christening or not, this is about the story, and if a character serves no purpose, then the character is best to be removed. Every scene AJ, RD, Rares, Flutters and Pinkie are in (in the actual show) can either have these characters removed or the scene can be written out and the story would actually be better, because all they do is mostly stand around and do nothing.
And you condict yourself,

They might not have been necessary, but they still needed to be there.

which is, are they needed to be there or are they unnecessary? This is a case of mutual exclusion. Given how little use they had in the show, and in this adaption thus far, I would argue that they unnecessary, beyond their role at the start.
If anything is invalid, it's your argument that since this is like a christening, many ponies close to the parents should be there. And if you truly believed that argument, why you didn't write the story such that Night Light and Twilight Velvet were already there helping the new parents when Twilight et al arrived?
Again my argument is solely based on the narrative, and you are using meta-narrative to counter it as appose to addressing it narratively, heck a simple, "I know you ain't too keen on the idea of AJ et al pretty much doing nothing in The Crystaliing PT1, but if you would please wait for The Crystaliing PT2, to see, you might find it very sastifying." or something around those lines would be a much better counter

10435227 Okay, let me ask you this. Why wouldn't they want to go and see the newborn child of their close friends. If someone you care about suddenly had a kid, you would want to go see that child. It doesn't matter that they have nothing to do, they need to go because that's what their character would do. Plus, they were invited. It might not have said so on the invite, but it's clear they were all invited the witness the Crystaling. Give me one good reason Shining and Cadance wouldn't invite them. And give me one good reason they wouldn't want to go to it. Other then, They're not needed in the story.

Oh! My eyes! Sorry to be rude but this chapter keep going back and forward on who is the focus! Is it Starlight or Flurry Heart or what?! At least, Starlight isn’t taking a spotlight from others.

"Yeah!" Scootaloo jumped up and down, "And I'm a..." She stopped and showed a semi-frown, "Wait...what does this make me?"

Aunt?

Heart then turned to Flash, who was sat back with his hooves behind his head and his eyes closed. "What did you get them?" Flash's eyes shot open, a long frown on his face as his student stared at him, "You did get them something...right?"

"Uh..." Flash's face turned red while the others rolled their eyes.

Really Flash? You forgot to get something for a baby? Did you really spend the whole 3 weeks of having a sex with Twilight and not thinking about your niece? :facehoof:

Everypony else continued to stare at the baby, who was cooing and flailing her legs around like a newborn usually did before Twilight broke the silence, "The baby is an Alicorn?!"

Congratulations Flurry Heart, you are a goddess since you are a natural born Alicorn like Celestia and Luna, look like you will be outliving everyone including your family.

Flash turned to his apprentice, "Heart, go find somepony that works in the kitchen and tell them the prince needs the strongest coffee they have." Heart saluted and flew out the room, Soul following after him as Flash moved over to Pinkie and reached into her mane. "Where do you keep your funnels?"

"They're in there deep. Third drawer." Flash nodded and reached into the mane until his shoulder was in there. "No, no, no, that's a bicycle, no, HA!" He pulled his hoof out, which was now holding a plastic drinking funnel with a long tube. "Perfect." He turned back to Shining. "By my oath, this crystalling will go off without a hitch." The others nodded as Twilight quickly smacked Shining awake before Rainbow and Applejack dragged him out of the room, Flash, Fluttershy and Rarity following him.

I never thought about this idea! That’s actually funny, Imagine Flash and others forcing Shining to drank a lot of coffee to keep him awake! :rainbowlaugh:

"There's no way I'm missing this train-wreck." She suddenly morphed into a fly, "Come on." With that, she flew toward the door's keyhole, Thorax sighed as he morphed into a fly to follow her inside.

I wonder if either Hiveena is a big shipper of Starlight and Sunburst or want to watch the cringy ness of their interaction?

Flash's eyes went wide at her words before taking to the air, staring at the edge of the city as they saw a bunch of dark storm clouds beginning to gather in the distance. A long sigh followed this, "Just once, can we go to a big event and not have our lives put in jeopardy?!"

I told you that you guys would be fighting against natural disaster! I knew the baby is the real villain of the story since she basically doomed her entire empire!

Also, Flash.... get used to it!

Great chapter with a bit of issue especially who was the focus of this 2 part chapters, can’t wait for the next one.

EDIT: BTW, it's Crystalling, not Crystaliing. (2 L, not 2 I)

An excellent start to another season! It looks like Heart and Soul’s training is going well, and Flurry Heart is just as cute as ever! I like that the CMC are tagging along here, probably since Scootaloo is related to Flash here, and how they all get a little jealous once they see Flurry.

I also really enjoyed Thorax and Hiveena here. Their wings changing is a good touch since they have been in the Crystal Empire for awhile now, and it gives a bit more time for foreshadow rather than just one episode like in canon. I like how Hiveena is still such a snarker here, like referring to Flurry as a “hell-raiser” and how she wanted to stay and watch Starlight and Sunburst’s “train-wreck”.

I can’t wait for next week to see more of this.

Celestia began to stroke the filly's head. "It appears her magic is more powerful than that of a newborn unicorn!"

"You think?!" Flash yelped, "We're lucky a smoking skeleton hasn't dropped down!"

Was that a reference to this old comic?
https://www.deviantart.com/evil-dec0y/art/Nothing-To-Sneeze-At-603741483

Edit: Cool, once again your story has been featured!

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Okay, let me ask you this. Why wouldn't they want to go and see the newborn child of their close friends.

1) This is a family event, would you crash an intimate family event of your friends, or would you appreciate your friends crashing one of your intimate family event?
2) Are they really close friends? There's limited evidence that they communicate aside from Twilight to them, both in the show and in your AU.
3)They could know that at Flurry's age, it would be best to limit the number of 'strangers' she would exposed to until she gets use to the 'strangers' that just met her

If someone you care about suddenly had a kid, you would want to go see that child. It doesn't matter that they have nothing to do, they need to go because that's what their character would do.

It's also in their character to let Twilight, Cadance, Shining, etc have a family event without them, also just because something 'what their character would do' does not mean that they need to, you are making an assumption of mutual inclusion. It's AJ's character to look after Apple Bloom, but it's not needed for her to baby Apple Bloom.

Plus, they were invited.

Citation needed. No, really, provide a citation that supports that claim.

It might not have said so on the invite, but it's clear they were all invited the witness the Crystaling.

No, its not clear that AJ, RD, Rares, Flutters and or Pinkie were invited, what is clear is that Twilight was invited and she elected to take them with her.

Give me one good reason Shining and Cadance wouldn't invite them. And give me one good reason they wouldn't want to go to it. Other then, They're not needed in the story.

Here's four
1) Since Flurry is a born Alicorn, they aren't sure what to say and who to say what to, but they know Twilight (and Flash) will honor their requests as they try to figure things out
2) Given the state of fatigue Shining (and Cadance to a much lesser extent) is possible that they didn't write their names down on the invite before sending it off
3)Newborns are highly subjectable to diseases (one of the major reasons why there are infant christenings), it would irresponsible of a parent to not limit the child's exposure, thus it would be far safer to only expose Flurry to Twilight and Flash, Twilight due to genetic similarity and Flash for having been raised in the same environment as Shining are less likely to have contagious pathogens that could infect Flurry
4) Also with regards to infants, they can only be exposed to so many adults that aren't their parents for only so long, I know this because my own nephew, who has yet to reach two, can have other adults that aren't his father and mother for so long and only so many people at a time. Flurry as a new born could only be comfortable around even fewer and for much shorter time.

Heck yeah, so nice to have the gang back! Loved how both sibs are adapting to Ponyville life with their respective mentors. I'm starting to like Hiveena even more, especially with her interactions with both Thorax & Spike during Starlight's *friendship lesson*, that was a hoot! :rainbowlaugh:
Course we can't leave off without some danger to the Crystal Empire with the heart shattering (thanks to a certain alicorn foal:twilightsheepish:), looking forward to see this new group's dynamic in dealing with the crisis! :raritywink:

And now for your schedule Highlights :

Her horn's aura began to spark, Twilight seeing a small sputter from the horn before the cup was suddenly crushed under the filly's magical grip.

"Ow!" she yelped as her horn quickly cut, the cup falling back onto the table. Her ears flopped down, whimpering, "No..."

"Don't worry, it'll be okay." Twilight responded while floating the crushed cup over to a bin. "You'll get it." She summoned another cup from a stack Pinkie had loaned them. "There's a reason we start this small. Just keep trying and you'll figure it out." Soul nodded and tried again, Twilight smiling as she saw her horn glow again before taking out a stack of papers. "Now for Starlight's first lesson."

Geez, glad that wasn't somepony's head! :twilightoops::pinkiesick:

The others flinched as they watched him hit the wall, the force causing him to be plastered while leaving a colt shaped indent. His eyes showed spirals before shaking his head and giving the group the pony equivalent of a thumbs up. "Nailed it!"

Well.....glad Heart's durable! :twilightsheepish:

"You blamed cutie marks and stripped a whole village of theirs, and when Twilight and the others stopped you, you went back in time and almost destroyed Equestria." Spike finished, Heart and Soul both going wide-eyed as this piece of information had not been made privy to them.

What, you 2 weren't the only ones going though Equestria shattering events this year you know! :ajsmug:

Heart then turned to Flash, who was sat back with his hooves behind his head and his eyes closed. "What did you get them?" Flash's eyes shot open, a long frown on his face as his student stared at him, "You did get them something...right?"

"Uh..." Flash's face turned red while the others rolled their eyes.

Better pick something up from the corner store Flash! :rainbowkiss:

It was here that both Flash and Twilight saw something different about Thorax and Hiveena, Flash pointing to their backs, "Hey, what happened to your wings?"

Their wings were now a bright blue, both having sparkles running along them as Thorax responded, "We're not really sure. They started changing about a week before Ruby came back."

The seeds are starting to sprout! :raritywink:

Scootaloo let out a huff, "Is it bad that I'm starting to get jealous of somepony that isn't even potty trained?" She took this moment to spread her own tiny wings, comparing them to the baby's, which were at least three times the size of her's.

"I bet she'll get her cutie mark way sooner then we did," Apple Bloom sighed while Sweetie nodded, the others rolling their eyes at the fillies.

*pats them on their heads* there, there. :applecry::unsuresweetie::scootangel:

The door then closed as Thorax turned to Hiveena, a smile on the changeling princess's face.

"What are you thinking?"

"There's no way I'm missing this train-wreck." She suddenly morphed into a fly, "Come on." With that, she flew toward the door's keyhole, Thorax sighed as he morphed into a fly to follow her inside.

lol oh yeah, I like her even more!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Flash's eyes went wide at her words before taking to the air, staring at the edge of the city as they saw a bunch of dark storm clouds beginning to gather in the distance. A long sigh followed this, "Just once, can we go to a big event and not have our lives put in jeopardy?!"

With your track record, are you that surprised Flash? :rainbowkiss:

Good first parter Banshee, looking forward to it's conclusion next week!:twilightsmile:

PS : I noticed the title for that upcoming story at the beginning of the chapter, hopefully a certain purple dragon will have a big part to play there! :moustache:

Courage is not the absence of fear, but acting despite being afraid.

C.S. Lewis also once described courage as every virtue when put under a point of testing.

"You think?!" Flash yelped, "We're lucky a smoking skeleton hasn't dropped down!"

Silverquill reference?
EDIT: Whoops. Wrong comic artist. :twilightsheepish: I knew it referenced something but couldn't remember who made the comic.

This has been fun so far. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this season.

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I realized that after reading SuperSonicHeroes's comment.

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I know you're proud of how you handled that, but in hindsight, having Flash replace Twilight's friends' admittedly small roles in your version of the story made the occasion feel less celebratory. :applejackunsure:

Looking good so far. I'm actually surprised that you didn't start out with a premiere story first.

Also one thing I REALLY like is how you didn't start off the story with Flash obsessively observing Starlight Glimmer. Because I really dislike tropes like that.

TURN OFF THE MATURE SETTING AND LOOK AT FEATURED! :pinkiegasp::yay:
EDIT: Actually, leave the mature setting on. It's not going to matter. :twilightsheepish:

10436097 (Does the Fonzie pose) Ayyy.

So far I'm really liking the way Flash is teaching Fire Heart. Maby him and Soul can take on Cozy Glow in seasons 8 and 9.

I like these two chapters. I like them a lot. We see Flash and Twilight growing into their roles as teachers, see Heart and Soul learn to cope with the chaos that comes with being Flash and Twilight's students, and get a foretaste of Flash's new abilities and limits. What you have put up here is a tad more chaotic than what we got out of canon, but I actually kind of enjoyed the chaos. I just hope that I'm still able to say that when the time comes for me to go through parenthood myself (says the girl who doesn't even have a boyfriend yet). :twilightsheepish:

Also, apparently, Hiveena is a bit of a blood knight. I know having her be on the heroes' side feels sudden and out of nowhere, but I hope she doesn't end up stabbing Ruby and everyone else in the back. Granted, she at least seems to care for Thorax, so as long as he's still in the story, we won't have to worry about anything on Hiveena's end. Hmm, I wonder what will happen to her when she finds herself in a situation without Thorax appealing to her better nature. :applejackunsure: You wouldn't by any chance have already thought of something to address that, would you? I mean, assuming that her turn is genuine, that would be the next most logical course of her character development.

10445834 I'm answering that by stating a character I've chosen to base Hiveena on. Blackarachnia.

Flash Prance's Fellow

You do know that Flash Prance was ret-coned into Flash Magnus, right?

10445891 Well it can be another guy called Flash.

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but I hope she doesn't end up stabbing Ruby and everyone else in the back.

I'm in the opposite camp, I want her to betray the heroes, mainly because Banshee has failed in his attempt to make me feel sympathy for her
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Blackarachnia

Which one, Transformers: Beast Wars pre-Season 3 opener, Transfomers: Beast Wars post Season 3 opener and Transformers: Beast Machines, or Transformers: Animated?

10445895 Post season 3, before she went Transmetal.

Eyepe, I was right, AJ, RD, Flutters, Rares and Pinkie were utterly narratively useless in this story, the CMC were are massively greater unnecessary part added, and Heart and Soul were... well they were at best a wash (what they actually added to the story was equal to how their presence actually hurt the story).
for the Re-maning 5 and the CMC, none of their involvement furthered the plot, developed their characters or flushed out the lore of the setting that could have been done without them in this story.
We actually get something from the kids, but they could easily been removed as well.
Frankly the only thing of note was actually worth while additions the head start on Thorax' friendship with Flurry and Hiveena being utterly bored until she helped Tia, Lulu and Flash... but even then, leaving the clouds as clouds feels... lazy, now if they were fighting Windigos, that would've been more interesting. Because you can't fight a true force of nature, all you can do is weather the storm, having the Windigos appeared here, citing that it was the love and light of the heart that kept them at bay. Unless you're gonna say that the clouds were Windigos in disguise, but yeah... this was a lack luster adaption from a lack luster two part.

Well, here's to hoping the first proper chapter will be better

Wow! This chapter is exactly same as the episode with few exceptions like Flash's giant avatar.

"Seriously, that was hard to watch." Hiveena grumbled as she crossed her front hooves, "I have never seen a more awkward conversation. And I once had an affair with a stallion whose wife walked in on us."

"Lady Hiveena!" Thorax barked back, making Hiveena shrug.

"What?! I was just being honest."

Ha ha ha ha ha! I didn't expect a former villainess like her to admitting so casually about having an affair in front of Thorax! Thorax must be feeling jelly! :rainbowlaugh:

"Oh please! Compared to what I faced in the war, how is this any worse?"

You know, I feel despite Heart willing to help people out, he still think being a Royal Knight is a fun and game and if he keep up with that cocky mistake, he will eventually either made a fatal mistake or getting his own arch-enemy since majority of Royal Knights have a tragic reason of becoming a Royal Knight and he doesn’t have that tragic reason compare to others.

Just saying.

Also, there’s not major change with Sunburst compare to other characters beside pestering Thorax and Hiveena to come to his his house. I wouldn’t expect if he’s going to stay like that like his show’s counterpart and is only there to develop Starlight’s character.

Okay, let’s see which episode that Banshee will adapt for this season?

* The Gift of the Maud Pie- No.

* On Your Marks- No.

* Gauntlet of Fire- Most likely.

I believe the next chapter is either an original story or Gauntlet of Fire.

P.S.

Spike really need a girlfriend because the way Spike act toward Starlight in Crystalling is more of a guy having a big crush on her than a friend helping a friend out despite Starlight will eventually end up with Sunburst. :rainbowlaugh:

10445909 I just spent the last few months making an entirely original story. I think I'm entitled to have this one be very similar to the show.

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Oh Good God, no. Blackarachnia was always at her best when she was a villain, her arc during her Transmetal 2 state had the benefit for being the briefest of her arcs and Beast Machine as the luxury of being conceded a-canonical, but post Season 3 opener to her transformation is just as bad as those two and doesn't have the benefit of being so short or being disregardible... and believe it or not I actually like her story, but she always better as a villain.

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Sorry.

I was just saying.

Well, I can’t wait for what’s in the store for this season. (Hopefully the next original story won’t take the toll out of you like War of the Lost City did.)

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Spike really need a girlfriend because the way Spike act toward Starlight in Crystalling is more of a guy having a big crush on her than a friend helping a friend out despite Starlight will eventually end up with Sunburst.

Well if the season 9 episode "Dragon Dropped" is something to go off of, there's Gabby, I'm more in the school of SpikeXSmolder

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I just want Spike to be with someone for once! Give him a girlfriend for once! The poor dragon just can’t catch a break.

It’s not like he going to spend the rest of his life of being a single dragon.... eventually he going to have to find his soulmate at some point.

That was a great opener. The small changes were enough to keep it interesting, like Flash helping Celestia and Luna hold off the weather before being joined by Hiveena.

Hiveena sure seemed to be having fun helping them. Either she was getting just as bored in the Crystal Empire as Cadance was implied to always be, or she was just enjoying being good for a change. I also thought it was cute how Thorax helped keep Flurry entertained and he and Hiveena got crystal forms too. I am a little upset with myself for nothing thinking of that power for Flash’s new form, considering a few years ago I once had a thought for the Equestria Girls Flash having a similar power to that if he had magic himself. I can’t wait to see what else Flash can do.

I’m guessing when the rest of the Defenders hear about this they will either be glad they stayed behind so they didn’t get involved in Flurry’s mischief or upset they missed out on such an amazing adventure.

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Spike really need a girlfriend

I have personally always shipped Spike with Ember the most, and season 6 is when she makes her debut so I have my fingers crossed that they become a couple.

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I have personally always shipped Spike with Ember the most, and season 6 is when she makes her debut so I have my fingers crossed that they become a couple.

I don't know, Ember is a little old for Spike, she's about the same age as Rarity, Twilight, etc, Smolder is a lot closer in age and in season 8 we see more interactions between Spike and Smolder in that season alone then we see between Spike and Ember in the entire series.

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Well I have always seen Spike and Smolder as having more of a brother-sister type bond than anything.

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Well I have always seen Spike and Smolder as having more of a brother-sister type bond than anything.

... okay, but how many times have Ember and Spike interacted with each other?
Beyond Gauntlet of Fire.
I can only list 3. Season 7 with Triple Threat, The season 8 opener when she introduces him to Smolder and in season 9 when Ember is having trouble during the first time she's overseeing the hatching of the dragon eggs. and given the shear amount of time between these episodes, this is why I see Spike with Smolder, they are much closer in age and they interact with each other more frequently and more times

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Look you are welcome to your opinion and I am welcome to mine. Smolder taught Spike about the Molt and dragon families, and Spike and Ember forged peace between Equestria and the Dragonlands and opened friendship as a concept to dragons. Besides I'm not even sure the age thing is a completely valid argument. For one thing it didn't stop Sparity from being a popular ship for years and we never actually hear what Ember's canon age is, so for all we know she could be a teenager like Garble or any other age. Besides, is a teacher-student relationship anymore acceptable to you? Because Spike is technically Smolder's teacher at the School of Friendship.

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Yes you are entailed to your opinion as I am to mine, however I do have a few responses

Smolder taught Spike about the Molt and dragon families, and Spike and Ember forged peace between Equestria and the Dragonlands and opened friendship as a concept to dragons.

There's a fundamental difference between the intimate lessons Smolder teaches Spike and the diplomatic accomplishments Spike preformed, also friendship did exist among dragons, it just wasn't the fowl weather friendship of the ponies.

Besides I'm not even sure the age thing is a completely valid argument. For one thing it didn't stop Sparity from being a popular ship for years and we never actually hear what Ember's canon age is, so for all we know she could be a teenager like Garble or any other age.

1) Just because something is popular, doesn't mean it should happen, that's an appeal to consensus logical fallacy. 2) While ages have never been for the most part canonically stated we can easily infer age differences due to height of the characters, 3) while you are correct that Ember may be closer in age to Gabby than Rarity, we don't know enough about how dragons age to make that conclusion, especially when compared to griffons, when for the most part we only have Equestria's ponies as frame of reference.

Besides, is a teacher-student relationship anymore acceptable to you?

Once Smolder graduates, which would be likely before Spike is mature enough to be in a more... active... relationship , that's a non-issue

Because Spike is technically SMolder's teacher at the School of Friendship.

Accept he's not, he's at best a glorified secretary

Nice Chapter Banshee. Flurry heart was one of my favorite characters she is so adorable. Looking forward to what you'll do with qubble pants.

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Quibble Pants was the pony Rainbow Dash met at the Daring Do convention in "Stranger Than Fan Fiction" and appeared again in "Common Ground".

10446228 Oh, him. Man that guy is forgettable.

A few changes here & there but still an enjoyable S6 opener, I'm starting to like Hiveena even more with how she took action against the weather (while having fun too!:rainbowlaugh:) , she's a keeper! :raritywink:
Also good grief, quite the preview on those new abilities from Flash, he really needs a whole new training regiment to keep those in check! :twilightoops:

And of course, can't forget the Highlights! :

Heart turned to his mentor, "I don't suppose gluing it back together is an option?"

"Oh, it's an option," Flash replied, "Just not a very good one."

*chucks the tube of Krazy Glue over the shoulder* Oh well, so much for that one! :ajbemused:

"Seriously, that was hard to watch." Hiveena grumbled as she crossed her front hooves, "I have never seen a more awkward conversation. And I once had an affair with a stallion whose wife walked in on us."

"Lady Hiveena!" Thorax barked back, making Hiveena shrug.

"What?! I was just being honest."

That must have been awkward! :twilightoops::rainbowlaugh:

"But your new powers are still untested," Twilight reminded him, only to see a certain determined stare on the pegasi's face. The sight made her sigh as she added, "Be careful and don't overdo it."

And you just jinked him, way to go Twilight! :twilightsheepish:

Heart let out a groan as he helped chase down the foal, "I'm really starting to not like babies."

"How do you think I feel?" Soul barked back, "I might end up giving birth to one of those in a decade or two."

Now that's a scary thought! :twilightoops:

Hiveena shined a big grin at this, "Finally, something exciting to do here." With that, she started blasting away the clouds, laughing every second as she did this. The others shared a glance, only to quickly shrug as they got back to work.

What, bug girl just letting off some steam in a productive way! :raritywink:

Twilight could barely believe her eyes, the alicorn reminded of something from when she, Flash and the Rainbooms defeated the Sirens. Flying above the Crystal Empire was a giant alicorn made entirely out of orange light. It was around the same height of the one that had defeated the Dazzlings, maybe even a little bigger. Within the avatar was Celestia, Luna and Hiveena, all glancing around as they floated inside the beast's main body.

Not gonna lie, that was awesome!!! :raritystarry:

Flash then placed a hoof on her shoulder, "Hey, this is your first time being a serious teacher. I know I've still got a long way to go before I'm ready to properly teach Heart." He turned to his student, who was talking to Rainbow and Scootaloo. "But that doesn't mean I shouldn't try."

"He's right," Spike added, "I know she needed to be put on the right path, but giving her the space to make her own decisions worked pretty well." He sat back and smirked, "Isn't that how Celestia taught you?"

Just love the snarky yet wise Spike, well said! :moustache:

Saw a few comments concerning Ember (especially since S6's her big debut) & Spike in a romantic way, personally I saw her as the tough yet very cool aunt for Spike. As for Smolder & Spike I would be happy either way (sister/girlfriend) since they had awesome chemistry together. I'll see what Banshee comes up with in terms of romantic partner for my fave purple dragon, especially since Sparity's definitely dead & buried with the inclusion of Lightning in these stories. (still waiting on the backlash when Spike finds out, not gonna be pretty:fluttercry:)

Till the next chapter, take care Banshee!!! :twilightsmile:

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Spike really need a girlfriend

NO ONE NEEDS a girlfriend or boyfriend to win in life. :ajbemused: I'm sorry if that came out harsh, but I don't think Spike's happiness should depend on his relationship status. :ajsleepy: I mean, a lot of people (including me) would like a significant other, but I don't think getting one should be the most important thing in life. Besides, I don't think Spike is mature enough for a relationship yet, but that's just my opinion. Additionally, AJ doesn't have a shipping partner either, and she seems content. I don't see why Spike can't be single and content also.

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Don't worry. I'm positive Banshee knows what he's doing.

This is a great chapter and I honestly hope your interpretation for the rest of Season 6 is an optimal one. Because canon Season 6 almost discouraged me from being a Brony.

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Does it have to do with Starlight Glimmer? Fans complain about Season 6 focus too much on her story arc to the point they called Season 6 "The Starlight Glimmer show".

If you hate Starlight Glimmer, Don't worry, Banshee said Starlight wouldn't receive too much focus for this version of Season 6 and she would receive around 5 chapters and most of those are opening and finale.

But if Starlight is not the reason, is there's a reason why you don't like Season 6?

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It WASN'T Starlight Glimmer, it was how the show handled Trixie's redemption so horribly. And I also felt that it was out of character for Twilight to antagonize Trixie after latter attempted to show she'd reformed herself.

I actually love Starlight Glimmer, she's great and physically attractive! I even ship her with Sunburst, a gorgeous OTP along with Flash Sentry x Twilight Sparkle and SoarinDash.

10446496 What do you think of my Trixie?

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Your Trixie was done perfectly! I REALLY love your version of Trixie.

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