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Sweet Tale


Completely mad, balding superhero :D

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Zecora is well known for her rhyme.
Rhyming is well in her prime.
One mishap from Twilight,
Everything goes snow-white,
Now there's nothing. Not even time.

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One-shot fic featuring Twilight, Applejack and Zecora.

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Comments ( 14 )

lemmy guess... orange...

As a deaf person, all I could do at the end was blink at this. Good thing I don't speak!:rainbowlaugh:

If this is a one-shot, how is it incomplete?

1465054 Ah, good spot my good sir. It is now fixed. For your efforts, have one of these :moustache:

"Anyone wanna play Dungeons and Dragons for the next quadrillion years?"

"I'm a 5th level vice president."

loved that episode

also loved this story keep up the good work

I read the cover image in Mr Bean's voice. :rainbowwild:

depending on the accent door hinge rhymes with orange silver might be better.

Well, there's only one thing left to say. Sir Raven, take it away:

Loved it. :rainbowlaugh:

Also...

"Huh...wha?......Not again...I felt her lips...I FELT HER LIIIIIPS!" Spike screamed.

This could be interpreted in one of two ways, if you know what I mean. :pinkiecrazy:

Alternate Ending(Hope you don't mind):
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"Pyro-dills are extremely rare. I know not of where they grow I must declare. They are considered a myth, gone out of existence. But the truth has been stretched, far into the distance."

"So, do you know what they look like? Have you ever seen them before?" Twilight asked.

"Once I have seen them, a long time ago. It was in a high place, where the wind ferociously blows. Their stems are bright green and their petals are orange. And though a beautiful sight, they made me cringe." Zecora said with a smile. Twilight tilted her head to one side, both at her statement and that she found a rhyme for the supposedly unrhymable word. "Why?" "Finding a word to rhyme with orange is hard, that much is true." she leaned closer conspiratorially, and stage-whispered "And me not rhyming would not bode well for me and for you."
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Try purple. Only word I could think of to rhyme it with was "Urkel", and that's a cultural thing.(I doubt Equestria has Family Matters)
On an unrelated note, you rhymed "ago" with "blows". Is that slant-rhyming?

They were a beautiful sight, even though they were...were...

LIGHT...ON THE RIGHT... ON THE TOP OF A KITE...WHITE...QUITE A FRIGHT!!!
That right there is how you rhyme folks! Wierd people drink yolks.

2637498 Curple rhymes with purple, it means butt, specifically a horses.

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