11077969
Well, now I'm glad you did too!

The beginning part in that shop was so bizarre.... that it took me out from enjoying the story

11123927
Yeah, I'm always afraid that might happen when I open chapters with little deviations from the timeline like that. I might edit it and place it somewhere hopefully less annoying after I get more chapters out. I hope it didn't completely ruin the story for you though

11124085
It honestly did ruin it for me because from what I can tell it doesn't really matter to the overall story. I thought her and her team was attacking the nearby town or something

11124940
Well, seriously, thanks for the honesty. I just kinda have a thing for doing flash forwards at the beginning of chapters like that, but I know it can risk the enjoyment of the story. I'll see if I can adjust it a bit down the road to hopefully be less of an awkward read.

11125000
Your very welcome, personally I dislike flash forward's because they don't always have enough impact within the current timeframe of the story. Maybe you could add it to the end of the chapter?