Three years ago, an alien spacecraft was discovered buried deep beneath the Everfree Forest. Without delay, it was excavated and thoroughly studied to the best of Equestria's capabilities. All signs pointed it being completely defunct, never to fly again.
Though unfortunately for creatures visiting it during its first day as a museum, the truth was the exact opposite.
A three hour tour of the ship has now turned into a grand tour of the galaxy. Will homesickness overtake these new explorers, or will they learn to love going where no pony has gone before?
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In Part I of their tale, the ponies arrive in a star system at the edge of the galaxy. Immediately, Luna is voted as 'captain', and the race is on to find out how to operate the museum turned starship before they run out of food. Will our intrepid night princess be able to lead her ponies to this goal, or will her self-doubts put an end to her captaining days?
And why can't her new Red Dwarf friend be less cryptic if there's danger nearby?
Yeah this is gonna be epic.
That should say please
Surprising
Shyly
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I'm firing my autocorrect after this :(.
Meaning
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That one was intentional
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Though I do appreciate your corrections :)
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Translucent
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Your welcome
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Lol I hate autocorrect. It doesn't seem to know how to spell at times lol
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I guess I'm missing the joke... to be honest the only thing that's coming to mind with the name Manning is someone named Peyton, who that is though not a clue.
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In this context, manning is used the same way one would say, "I'm manning the guns!"
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of course
I was WAY overthinking it lol
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Haha, it happens. And to be fair, 'manning' wasn't the best word for me to use in a pony fic. Just couldn't think of anything else.
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You know I didn't even think about that... ponying? Equining? *throws hooves up* I don't know. Ack overthinking again... I just can't help it sometimes lol
Oof, that’s roughly the radius of our galaxy. They got quite the journey ahead of themselves
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They also have 2 forms of FTL Drive, if I understood the computer correctly.
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Yes, but the one best suited for such distance relies on a hyper rare fuel source that they don’t have any of. They’ll have to either use the hyper drive,once they get their bearings and fuel for it, to either go to the planets that have the rarer fuel or go straight home, whichever turns out to be closer. And then there is the potential issue of the civilization that controls said planets, which might not be exactly welcoming.
Well, that could have gone better. This should make for quite the adventure. Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Well, that's enough to tell me they're definitely not in their home star system then--even traveling just as far from one star system to the next nearest is often enough for all of the stars to appear to be in different relative positions.
So this premise is starting to sound something like Stargate Universe...only much more comedic, which I'll definitely not complain to.
...well, actually, upon thinking it further, Star Trek: Voyager is probably a better comparison...whatever, the point is I'm hooked! Please sir, can I have another chapter?
Certainly caught my attention.
Didn't like the reference to how Luna didn't rule as long as Celestia did due to the lost 1000 years and her retiring recently..
But I did like Luna and Spike's interaction a bit there. Hope there is more between those 2 down the line.
Liked that Luna is captain too of that ship now. Would be interesting to see her learn more about all that tech stuff along with learning more from that franchise Spike mentioned about.
Yeah... hated the reference to how the movie shafted the sisters badly with Tempest humiliating them like that infront of all of Equestria.
Sorry.. just still bitter on what the movie did to Luna. Whats worse is how the show brushed it aside, like.. wouldn't that failure there badly affect especially Luna?
At least Tempest would be able to change out of her free will, unlike Luna who was forcibly purified and turned good by the Elements instead of her resolving the darkness within her on her own(and like controlling her dark powers and befriending her darker split personality). The actual issues that led to NMM happening weren't properly resolved and its like the Elements basically brainwashed her and made her accept she's inferior to Celestia.(Like.. Luna really deserves to shine much as Celestia did, not be forced to accept she's doomed to be in her shadow) I just hated how things were handled there in the show..
Aside from that stuff..
Liked how Luna pondered more about the stars and looks like that stuff will be explored here like with the "Star Speaker" bit Luna heard.
Along with liking more interactions seen there. Wonder if she would eventually learn more about the advance stuff that would be often confusing to others when Doctor Hooves explains such as Wormholes?
So interesting chapter I suppose.
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To be fair, Tempest did have to cheat by using those stone grenade things 😋
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A humiliating loss is still a humiliating loss though..
Especially with how the sisters kept losing every turn during crisis stuff if they get involved in.
It just can't be ignored sadly..
Also Twilight avoided that humiliation pretty much. Yeah, she got lucky but fact still remains she manages to win despite the bad guy is packing stuff that hard-counters like the Obsidian Orbs.
I don't think I would ever live it down with how the writers shafted Luna in the movie like that..
Same with how thing went for her in the series finale.
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Luna will have a chance to prove just how powerful she is by the end of this fic (or series, since it'll likely be multiparty).
And let's just say she has some pretty powerful 'friends', too.
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Looking forward to that. With the power stuff and the "friends" you mention.
Though I wished the certain embarrassments are addressed too instead of like.. how the writers had Luna brushed said stuff aside(with how much of it has happened, no way either sister would not feel not so confident).
Heck.. look at this meme thing
Who would win: One majestic princess that can control celestial stuff and crazy magic OR... one smol orb boi(I probably effed that up but yeah..)
Sorry about that..
Looking forward on seeing what you got in store for Spike too.
I just love seeing how he and Luna interacts in general pretty much.(If only the show did that much more often)
Ohhhhhh, I should shoot you for that horrible horrible pun.
Well, he needed to go finish Green Hill Zone, so...
Oh good, they aren't alone. I know they weren't alone to begin with, but eight creatures is not enough to crew a ship that apparently is bigger than Canterlot.
I am really enjoying this story. Keep it up.
The amount of pure nerd in this chapter is precious and I will continue shoving every update to this fic into my eyeballs.
Pretty interesting with Scootaloo about to mess around with those fighter craft(shame the writers decided to go with her being disabled and make her wings incapable of flight.)
Interested on what Doctor Hooves has found for Luna there too.
Still better than Temple of Doom, IMO.
Void Inquisitor...sounds like a literal name for a ship designed to go poking around space and seeing what's there, if anything...or just making sure the "void" of space is in fact still a void wherever they go: "Is it still a void now? Good!...Is it still a void now? Good!...Is it still a void now? Good!..."
Alright, can't wait for Rainbow to fall asleep in her new quarters, just for the computer to suddenly start educating her on Newtonian physics without pausing... for hours.
Obligatory:
Well, that's not at all ominous.
This computer definitely has a lot of personality to it. I'm not sure how to feel about that, especially since it itself doesn't know why it's so readily accepted the ponies as its new crew. Still, this should be very interesting. Especially since it seems that Luna really can communicate with stars.
Huh, this sounds like a crossover with Starbound. Even if it isn't it still looks interesting.
Two small ornaments of strange lizert like creatures?
Maybe Luna just found Torchs parents momentos?
You dont need all the fancy materials to open a wormhole if you have a big enough spinal cannon, if its energy based. Just need a crudload of recoding.
Void Inquisitor? Anyone else get 40k vibes from that?
What, no holodeck malfunctions?
That talk of the Deep Ones is deeply concerning. Especially the corporal punishment. Let's hope the computer doesn't mind more lenient discipline policies.
Liked that Spike is First Officer there.
Curious on what happens next :0
Clearly, you have not yet learned enough about "Space Trek," Luna.
I'm more concerned whether or not one would want to meet these...Almighty Deepest. Because the more I learn about this ship, the more I wonder about just what sort of creatures the previous owners were...
Case in point.
Well, isn't that awfully convenient for them.
Especially if you don't put on any red-colored shirts!
He is now required to grow a beard and proceed to never sit down in a chair like a normal person would. But it'll be great, Spike--you get a lot of the girls this way!
Yeah, I'm starting to think the previous owners were more...imperialistic than democratic, if you catch my meaning. Which means they might want to take their Space Trek references and take them through the transporter accident into the mirror universe at this point--it'll probably be a more apt comparison at this point.
Liked that it looks like Luna would still be dreamguardian even after erm.. retiring.
Kind of surprised some of the other Student Six aside from Ocellus are on board too.
Hoping to see more on what Luna encountered in the dream realm there.
Also curious on if the ship having an armory there, what tech/weapons it might have there.
A random thought I had there.
Consider me highly intrigued.
Is this based off of another story?
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There are a lot of Scifi references and concepts used, though I wouldn't say it's specifically based off anything.
I am rather curious will you touch on the immortality of luna?
As it affects the crew. Since she can not die or will not. I expect?
Thank you for a lovely chapter. I epreciate your gift of a great story! I have looked and love the idea and concept. Reminds me of the podcast a little to be honest. Startripper which is phenomanel.
Peace.
Ps. A addition to my point is due to her immortality and if full takes away from the natural tension of your splendid story. Since the solution to general problem be. Oh immortal bam? Ya know?
Oh what if the aliens that are watching their planet judge them for immortality? What if aliens are harmony?
Pps. Have any aliens been watching their planet! Please no spoils!? :)
Ppps. That would be dope as heck fire.
Thank you again for your time and any criticisms are welcome!
The only question now is who will be on the night shift?
Lyra...not the time, girl.
Ocellus...Gallus is smart enough to not be caught in a red shirt.
Besides, none of you normally even wear shirts anyway (except, I suppose, Grubber), so...semi-moot point anyway. At the very least, the red shirt moniker doesn't work so well here.
That being said, I actually don't want most of these characters to be reduced to mere redshirts--they ought to be, at the very least, full-on secondary/supporting characters and with their proper share of the screen time, so to speak. The fact it took this long to even really meet with them like this is probably my one major criticism for this fic, but it's one that can be easily sorted moving forward.
Oooh, boy, Gallus, you just won a lot of respect from yours truly from that. Star Trek remains my first sci-fi love, but Stargate's a very close second.
Now I'm wondering what he could do with some leola roots.
Sacrifice's to the Deep One's? Did the people that built this ship worship Cuthulu, Dagon and their brethren?
I think that ought to read something like "The distance light travels in one year"
Loved with how Spike helped Luna out with handling being captain and such.
With how Luna mentioned on how Celestia managed to raise the moon too, I wished the show could have touched on the issue of Luna feeling like if she even mattered(since how Celestia can raise the moon while apparently Equestria was completely fine with Luna not dreamguarding for a 1000 years).
Kind of wonder if Luna would eventually be able to prevent herself from getting booted out from the Dreamrealm by that entity?
Along with wondering if she would figure about the issue of mana being low and such due to the environment not having magic there(as in aside from having to use her own energy since eventually they will run out of food faster).
Part of me also wonders if Luna's darker half(Nightmare Moon) might be touched on too in a way?
Metaphorically, of course, seeing there's no actual sails on this ship.
At that point, doc? Nah, it's definitely safe to say its tidally locked. It's the only physical way I know of where you could get such extreme environments so clearly cut between hemispheres like that. Plus, science suggests that worlds closer to their parent star tend to have a higher chance of becoming tidally locked...depending on the world's origins and the age of the star system, of course.
Well, I wouldn't say always--again, the system's origins and the nature of the planet could play factors into it.
Suddenly envisions a "Galileo Seven" sort of scenario...
He's clearly never watched Rarity sew five different dresses at once.
The problem there is that if you don't know the true nature of reality, you can't know the best ways to make it bend.
Yeah, no one's a big fan of that design.
In any case, some very interesting stuff with the eldritch entity in the dreamscape, to say nothing of what looks to be a salvage operation. Definitely looking forward to more.