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Ablegabriel
If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.
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Why did you give Ember male genitalia?
10365305
I'm a futa fan. Duh.
I loved this story
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Thank you
Dragoness Goddess is really reduntant I feel. Goddess already says your female, and yes I saw Ember is a Hermaphrodite.
10365337
I felt that way too, I may change the title later if I can
you could tie it in with thank you mistress
This is certainly something. Not Terrible but could definitely use some polishing. Now before I go on I’m not trying to judge, only give my honest opinion.
Now the premise is easy enough to understand, it’s basically a gory clopfic with ember as the main protagonist. Can’t say I seen many with her as the lead so this could definitely work as a new take on old-ish idea. The idea being the main character essentially getting what they most desire with little resistance or consequences to them. That could also work in this fix favor as it’s a porn without plot story with what I assume is a 1-2k word count per chapter. About the norm for most stories like this.
There are how ever issues, major ones if I may. Now these issues could be rectified in later chapters so please take my words with a grain of salt but this all feels... strange I suppose. It’s chapters aren’t long and it’s not a plot driven story so I doubt the quick pacing to be a big problem. It’s a problem but one that could be over looked. Things like the setting, time, and characters however can’t be.
When first reading this I though This was taking place right when spike gives her the scepter but it took a second reading to realized she’s just in the throne room with Smoulder. I’ll take blame for this however since I was skimming through this the first time as well.
That’s pretty much all I could say with my limited knowledge on reviewing and such. I want to give this story the benefit of the doubt and say it could be great like most things. Am I expecting it to be a masterpiece, oh heavens no. Pure clip and guilty pleasures alone aren’t enough. However that doesn’t mean it should stick to the norm and do as it’s expected. Maybe Celestia and Luna senses this new ember and had the girls scatter, not wanting equestria best chance to fall victim to ember and the dragon lord will have to go on hunt for them. Conquering nations and races along the way as two and the gang try and form a resistance to stop her. Or maybe Ember struggles mentally as in she goes into a nightmare moon phase where her personality splits once she gains affection for her supposed “slaves” and see them as more than that. But those are just my thoughts. It’s too soon to give this a proper rating so the author better bring their A game if they want it~. Until then, take care and keep pushing. The world thrives off creativity ^>^
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That wouldn't really work. Also, I DO plan on continuing tym at some point, I just am very busy.
Awesome i love your stories can’t wait for the next chapter
this is just getting better and better
why is all the good futa ember stuff anthro
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You like this but don't like that it's anthro. Hmm. It isn't exactly completely anthro, Ember is i guess, but myeh. I hope you will still read it, though
10366759
thats not anthro. are the ponys on two legs with hands or on four legs with hooves?
ember is ember shaped plus or minus a bit
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hooves
10366769
then you should take the anthro tag off
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just did
10366773
Thre is or isn’t anthro?
10367014
no anthro
10367014
Kind of if you consider bipedal dragons anthro
10367100
Sort of
nice work on both chapters
This fic was added to the Hypnosis/Mind Control group, but after reading both chapters I'm not seeing any of that at all. Future plans?
I read it and it wasn't bad.
But also not a clop-fic. Wish ther was either rape, necro or just simple playing with the "food" before swallowing. Get some pussy and dick eating in ther next time. :] :P
Also if you wanna write a story about my commission that you just posted on DB be my guest . ;3
10367346
Yes, future plans.
10367494
There's going to be rape next chapter, and I'm sorry, but i'm afraid i don't remember your commission. Could you remind me?
10367721
;) hehe
Rape is boooring... if they are alive!
And I'm talking about the newest upload from https://derpibooru.org/profiles/Nebbie he have your finfiction profile linked so I was thinking it's you. :)
10368036
link the specific upload, i cant find it
10368234
https://derpibooru.org/images/2415379 This one. My old commission I posted on Pixiv. :)
10368036
that has nothing to do with me.
10368349
Ok! Well somone have your profile linked and is uploading drawings on derpiebooru. I personally don't mind it. But you should check if he is not pretending to be you. :)
Well at least I found this story thanks to that. :P
10368414
his profile isn't mine
(Edit: Replied under wrong chapter; see 10370207.)
10370184
The hell? How is it in consensual?
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10370207
Oh. Fuck.
10370207
How do I fix this?
this getting better and better
nice work ill make it number 7
You got a link to a ful-res version of that artwork?
10373420
I can try to find one.
10370211
Looks as though someone removed it from all but one category. I've removed it from the last.
I like it.
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Here's the artist's post of it on Derpi: https://www.derpibooru.org/images/2083158?q=artist%3Amarik+azemus34
10421534
Your name is cole train. I have to do it.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great work keep it up