Having characters buck like crazy to prevent a chaotic apocalypse?

I like that idea so much I incorporated it 4 times with my HiE story

This was amazingly good. I look forward to more!

... Awesome.

The prose is a bit purple, but the premise is interesting. Not the first time I've seen an Equestria (or at least a Twilight) that's never heard of sex. Looking forward to seeing how you answer the obvious questions.

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Yeah, I found writing it felt stilted too, but it's an unfortunate side effect of describing sex in a clinical way, which you have to do if sex is a foreign concept to the characters.

Hmm. I wonder where things'll go.

So, they have the parts yet, in the entire history of Equestria, not a single pony has EVER had sex and has no idea what it even is? So then, exactly where do foals come from if nopony has EVER had sex?

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Storks and cabbage patches, duh.

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Mail order. Allow 4-6 weeks for delivery.

Without anything separating her from her nethers, the unicorn was exposed fully to the sensation of the state she was in.

Not to be that guy, but earlier you said Twilight was an alicorn.

She was the Princess of Friendship, the youngest alicorn in Equestria, and a public figure to the ponies of the land. She shouldn't - she couldn't - be regressing towards infancy!

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As it turned out, I called her a unicorn twice, which should have been alicorn. Thanks for spotting the error.

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You’re welcome. I spotted the second unicorn too, but it was after making my comment and I didn’t feel like editing it.