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[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof
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Please make part 2
Great work
That was a downright steamy story. Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up. Yeah, I could see where Velvet might be a bit self-conscious (i.e. recently divorced with adult children and a granddaughter, plus a love of life and good food even when she was in her prime) and trying to work up the nerve to get out and about again. And I could definitely understand Gallus's reflections on the beach. The two's interactions were just the right mix of awkward and hot.
Definitely looking forward to more of your work.
I have to see the reaction
Now Gallus can tell the Twilight that he literally "did your mom"
Come on, there’s gotta be more
This could easily become a multi-parter, please continue this
This was great. A very interesting pair.