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Comments ( 51 )

Unf.

This is good

Why was this added to the futa group?

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That was my bad, I'm removing it now.

Itchy clopgroup-addin' fingers do afflict us all from time to time.

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Why thank you my good lion! What do you like best about it?

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The descriptive language is just... Woah

Not to mention it has my favorite character getting bred by a stud XD. How could I not enjoy that?

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Ooooh, tender. Yeah, the story really came together when we realized pre-demption Thorax could be the ultimate tease, esepcially considering the aloofness. Bring in the Brotherhoooves Social episode, and well... instant shenanigans.

Look forward to seein' your comments on more of my stuff - I've got oh-so-many-more clopfics where this came from.

There's not enough male/male on the site. Thank you!

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I live to fill the voids, my man (with creamy goodness if the need arouses arises).

>anthro
you were so close
so damn close
all you had to do was avoid anthro, and you failed

I'm not a fan of gay porn. Nonetheless, I thought this was gay ngl.

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Can accept that

it is in fact, gay

Comment posted by Muggonny deleted Jul 30th, 2020

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Updoot for accuracy

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All you had to do was not say anything, and you failed.

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Imma saying you're cool for still liking the story, even if you're a bit put off by the theme. You're a good pony, Muggony. And I loved your Back At It Again entry as well.

This couldn't have caught my interest faster. Excellent setup! :D

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I owe quite a bit to Jackelope. Hope to work well with him again.

And thank you so much for give my fic a little well-wishing through words. I take it as a point of pride someone so cloprolific put my (well, my and Jack's) work on their radar.

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>being born

You were so close to being respected.
So close.
... and then you were fucking born.

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I read this and it made me cry even tho it wasn't directed toward me. :'(

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Also you ship your OC with Fluttershy in your pfp, imagine being that desperate for affection; It really explains your anger at everyone that isn't you since they lead more fulfilling lives.

Also this is your favorites list and it has two anthro stories in it. Why are they there if you dislike anthro? I think you might be a little bit of a hypocrite.

Also I upvoted your story just to spite that clown <3

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Aw, thanks. But you don't have to fight him on my behalf; think the L was taken when this 'ruined' fic hit sinbox.

I do thank you for the... very spirited counterattack, though lucky. The blast zone was quite impressive on that burn.

Oh sweet, anthro. Anthro is good.

Only incels hate anthro.

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what are you if you hate both?

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A fine argument; may I present a rebuttal?

>no hooves

Story was pretty good tho

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A self hating incel

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Even if I hadn't upvoted because this is a damn good story, I would have upvoted because of this upvote. :3

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Oooh, thanks for the compliment - I thought the story was quite compelling myself, especially with all the work Jacelope did to help get it past the finish line.

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You get a follow for quoting one of the best movies of all time! :raritystarry:

I love this story I am all for a good gay story with my favorite stallion big Mac he is so hot u did awesome

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Why thank you kindly, my good stallion.

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Yw anything to do with big Mac being gay is the best

Comment posted by Mnemonic_Horse deleted Jul 30th, 2020

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Derpi has it too, under the pic number 1349683.

Have fun, mate!

Well now this was an excellent story :raritywink::eeyup:

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Thank you kindly for letting me know that! :eeyup:

This was fun, but some over the top language and descriptors are a little... extra. To the point of being more funny than sexy. Still, job's a good'un.

We need more Orchard Blossom :eeyup:
easy upvote and fav

To the author - i had saved this story into one of my bookshelf lists due to me having a very crappy laptop (now i did receive a new laptop on Christmas of 2020 & haven't used it as i need to remove links off the other one) it's time consuming process
my reaction to the reveal of thorax was like ''omg i love him!'' also he's best gay changeling hands down😍

p.s: don't let negative comments prevent you from writing stories using mlp characters in anthro form.
here's something to brighten up your day/sprits https://www.twitch.tv/videos/921869513

message written out on 3/25/21

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