A Bug's Waif

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SweetBanana

SweetBanana #1 · Aug 30th, 2020 · · ·

As always, let me know what you think here in the comments!

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #2 · Aug 31st, 2020 · 3 · ·

Fic looks like a million bucks, especially with how appetizingly you described Pharynx as a half-hunk, half changeling.

Thanks for a fantastic FIMFic - and for giving me the chance to make it more fantastic.

Wartank55

Wartank55 #3 · Aug 31st, 2020 · 1 · ·

so Pharanx pulled a Westley from A Princess Bride
Nice

Master king

Master king #4 · Sep 3rd, 2020 · 1 · ·

This was a wild and spicy/sweet story I hope there's a sequel.

abrony-mouse

abrony-mouse #5 · Oct 11th, 2020 · · ·

love the title :)

Shadowkage

Shadowkage #6 · Oct 23rd, 2020 · · ·

Link to the full art for the cover?

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #7 · Oct 28th, 2020 · 1 · ·

I sat there in silence as I prepared an answer for the bug-horse. (Work on this part)

Forgot to take self-notes out?

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Trick Question #8 · Aug 9th, 2021 · · ·

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The long desc is confusing to me in several places, Sweet. Who is the queen in "his queen's reforged pussy"? Are you saying the human was turned into a changeling queen as punishment for trying to dethrone Thorax...? "Ejected in a changeling pod..." doesn't make much sense, so I assume you mean "altered by (or in) and ejected from", but I'm not sure why being ejected is important. "Human's" is not a correct abbreviation for "human is". By "meant to" do you mean "fated to", or "intends to", or just "will" b/c you're revealing that it will happen when the story concludes? That's also a little confusing, because initially you say the attempt to overthrow Thorax happened at the very beginning (which led to the alteration), so it sounds like you're saying after "punishment" he (now presumably she) will try to do it again and succeed the second time—without explicitly explaining that there are two coup attempts. Also, did you mean "broodmare" rather than "broodmale" (those letters are adjacent on Dvorak), or is that correct?

SweetBanana

SweetBanana #9 · Aug 9th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Oh heck I wasn't expecting a comment on this old of a fic. I wrote this when I was er, going through some more complicated gender feelings. I'll tidy it up here later

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