Equestria Girls: The Mare-Do-Well Returns

by Time Agent pony

Chapter 1

Few mouths ago.

Sunset Shimmer's apartment.

"Well," Starlight said, putting on her Mare-Do-Well costume, "time for me to head out again."

Sunset and the rest of the CHS seven were resting up after they had saved the world from Parallax and his forces.

"Take care," Sunset smiled.

Putting on her mask, Starlight left.

Sunset, still smiling, picked up her journal and pen.

"Whats going to happen to the Mare-Do-Well when Starlight returns to Equestria?" Sunset thought, to herself as she started to write.

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The present.

Trixie walked along the road to CHS, the sun was shining, the sky was blue.

"What a great and powerful day," Trixie smiled, to herself, "no surprises there, I mean I am the Greatest and Powerfulest student of CHS."

With the smile still on her face, Trixie arrived at Canterlot High School and walked through the front doors.

The school was a buzz with activity, students were rushing around going to and from lessons.

Trixie passed by classroom after classroom, one where students were being taught how to control their abilities, another where the history of the worlds first enhanced individuals (the first name given to people who demonstrated extraordinaries) was being taught.

So of the normal students, Trixie included, had struggled to adapt to having students with super powers, but after a time teens with super powers attending CHS became a regular thing and was excepted and expected.

Trixie had even made friends with some of the new arrivals, some of them had joined her magic act.

Like Jubilation Lee a.k.a. Jubilee, with her pyrotechnic energy blasts to give Trixie's act a little more piazza.

As a resolute of that, some students had become fans of Trixie's magic show.

This in turn, had made Trixie slightly more confident in her shows popularity.

But for now, Trixie put the thoughts of her magic act out of her headed for class.

After first period, Trixie headed for the cafeteria to eat lunch, pausing on the way to grab some peanut butter crackers from the vending machine.

As she picked out her food, Sunset and Twilight watched from another table.

"Do you really think Trixie's ready for something like this?" Twilight asked.

"Well," Sunset replied, "it's what Starlight wanted, so we have to trust her."

Later, near the end of the day.

Trixie headed for her locker to grab somethings before heading home.

As she was about to close her locker, she noticed something in her locker that wasn't there before.

A briefcase with an M logo on top of the lid, there was something the logo that look familiar to Trixie.

With her curiosity peaked, Trixie opened the briefcase and her mouth almost hit the floor.

Inside the briefcase, was the suit of the hero Mare-Do-Well.

Comments

[Comickook]

Excellent job on the first start of this latest story in your series. Have to definitely respect the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Yeah, Canterlot City has LOTS of super-heroes these days, but most of them are, by necessity, so focused on natural disasters, giant monsters, super-powered criminals and alien invaders that they need somebody to focus on dealing with the small-time criminals and generally looking out for the little guy. So, yeah, I could see where they might need a new Mare Do Well after Starlight went back to Equestria. And, yeah, Trixie as the Mare Do Well would pretty much be a full-on Darkwing Duck Expy. Of course, we're going to wonder who are going to end up her Launchpad and Gosalyn later on, but that's for later.

Trixie/Mare Do Well: (appearing in blue smoke) I AM THE TERROR THAT GALLOPS IN THE NIGHT! I AM THE ANNOYINGLY PERSISTENT TELEMARKETER THAT CALLS YOU AT THREE IN THE MORNING! I am - (as a few criminals fire bullets into the smoke) SO glad that this costume is bulletproof. Even though that hurt like the blazes. (to the criminals) Anyway, you larcenous lowlifes, surrender or face the fury of the Mare Do Well!

Small time criminal: (sarcastically) Oh, we are SO scared of a teenage girl trying to play Batman. I know Batman. I once ratted out a counterfeiter to Batman and YOU aren't any Batman.

Trixie/Mare Do Well: Very well. Don't say I didn't warn you, small-time scum. (to herself) Okay, I know this belt has some knockout gas in here somewhere. (pulls out a cartridge and tosses it, only for the criminals to start itching up a storm) Okay, that was itching powder, but it still did the trick. (to the civilians she just helped) Scratch one set of mangy muggers. (to herself) Now to find something to hold them until the police arrive (reaches into her utility belt again and this time pulls out a strong net) Perfect. (uses the net to ensnare the criminals while they are still itching)

Civilian: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Trixie/Mare Do Well: You are quite welcome, solid citizen. Let this be a sign to all those who lurk in the shadows and prey upon the innocent. Let terror pierce their blackened hearts, for though they may flee to the ends of the Earth; though they may fight with all their might; no evildoer shall escape or defeat THE MARE DO WELL! (tosses another smoke bomb and a rope to climb and swing away)

Sorry about that. Got a bit carried away.

Anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.

[Time Agent pony]

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Again thanks for the comment, the ideas and the support
I really like the Darkwing Duck ideas

[Comickook]

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You are extremely welcome. I'm glad you like those ideas.

[Comickook]

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And, oddly enough, I HAVE just thought of another few ideas for the MUCH later chapters:

Sunset: I have to admit, so far, you ARE doing a great job, Trixie, but -

Trixie: But what, Shimmer? I thought we had an understanding. You leave the small-time criminals and mobsters to ME, *I* leave the giant monsters, natural disasters and alien invaders to you and your super-powered girl scout troop.

Sunset: I was going to say, you should be very careful about not letting the positive attention go to your head and cause you to forget about the innocent people you're supposed to be protecting. Unfortunately, it seems at least half of that is too late.

Trixie: What are you talking about? There's not a street punk in this city that isn't afraid of the Mare Do Well. The small timers that think that they can slip through the cracks because you have to stay focused on the fate-of-the-world tier bad guys are definitely thinking more than twice, which is a VERY good thing. And all those innocent people are loving it too.


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And, the first actually super-powered criminal Trixie could fight as the Mare Do Well could be Maxwell Dillon aka Electro (the villain that INSPIRED Megavolt).

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The MAIN villain (the one that reminds Trixie just how serious being a super-hero actually is) could be the Batman Who Laughs (he's from another universe AND combines the most dangerous aspects of the actual Batman AND the Joker, so he would be an excellent analogue to Negaduck). Either that or Wilson Fisk/the Kingpin (who would be a great analogue to Taurus Bulba).

And, again, I let my thoughts run away with me.

[Time Agent pony]

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thanks for the ideas, they are much appreciated

[Comickook]

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You're quite welcome, again.