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Creativa-Artly01


Epileptic-autistic eldest of four, artist, creative, and horse crazy girl who is obsessed with entertainment media and history among other things.

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It was a normal rodeo in town sort of day in Appleloosa, one I came to watch with Applejack when I met him. I fell head over hooves for him and he for me. Now we go to every rodeo together, inseparable, someday down the line to tie the knot and have a family together, a happy life together at last after all the pain, suffering, and loss I’ve been through. I need this, I need this happy ending.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 25 )

That description is a mood

This is good. Keep up the good work! I don't have a boyfriend irl either. :(

10336835
Then what are Jack and I to you? :C

10336848
I'm telling Jack about this blasphemy. You'll hear from our lawyers.

Interesting idea, but slow the pacing down a bit.

Don't we all wish we had a boyfriend gf irl?
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10336835

I may not have read this story yet, but I'm definitely sure that the comments written were just meant to confuse the author.

10491287
And you’d be right. I’m confused by the comments and the amount of downvotes even on this story.

10491345
I think I know why so many people disliked your story, and I think it's because of how it's set up. You see from what I know, love stories mainly focuses on how a couple got together. Some have it as the first act of the story (i.e Twilight, Romeo and Juliet, etc.), some have it as a subplot. Your story however has the main couple fall in love immediately after meeting. That removes the illusion that it can happen to anyone else. The first chapter sucked, and as they all say, "the first expression makes up for everything".

If however people disliked this story because of your short description, then that's just dumb. That's the whole point of love stories and fanfics. to experience something we won't experience, or something we haven't yet to experience. If they disliked your story for being honest in the description, then why are they even reading fanfics to begin with?

Sorry if this comment is too long, I tend to write my explanation when answering something.

10491549
It’s 100% for the description, I hecking swear.

10491612
It most likely is. Hypocrisy really is a female dog.

“Yeah, my sister and brothers, mom, aunt, uncle, cousins, grandparents, I don’t know when they’ll come to visit, it never lines up,” I sigh.

“Why didn’t ya mention your paw?” AJ inquires.

“I don’t wanna talk about it,” I respond beginning to cry.

I've spent some time after following your account reading some of your blogs and some of your stories, and I can't help but notice that your OC's father is alive in her story and backstories. And since your OC is a reflection to yourself, I can only deduce that your real life father died between the time you wrote your OC's character sheet blog, and this story. In which case, if it's true, I'm deeply sorry for your loss.

10500072
It is true. Last year, daddy took his life. Early this month October 2nd was the one year mark and November 4th is gonna be hecking hard because that’s his birthday.

10500566
I'm so sorry for bringing up this touchy subject, and you have my condolences.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

Y'know, this and the previous two chapters can be considered as one chapter if you merge them together.

10549012
Yeah, I’ll consider it. Thanks for the advice.

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