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Wow wow this is unexpected! And awesome!
Just reread the story and caught up late last week. This update is a sign, I shouldn't stop reading to sleep.
By the green-glowing Goddesses...
I'll need a whole month to regrow the nails I bit off just reading this one :V You really know how to twist all the right nerves when it counts, huh?
Brimstone. Blitz.
Brimstone fuckin' Blitz.
That was the most intense, jaw-dropping fight I have ever experienced. It literally played out as a brutal slugfest -- not between two characters with extreme, deeply personal vendettas against each other -- between two staggeringly titanic forces of nature. The raw power getting thrown around was straight disgusting in all the right ways. I'll admit; I'm biased. BB is my favorite, he's the one I've scrutinized and rooted for the most. Every time this character steps into the ring, the show is as good as stolen; you know shit is about to get seriously fucked the fuck up.
The sheer poetic justice of finding him suited up in the Epic Plot Device That's Been Sitting Around for How Long Now? was enough for me to take a step back and sit outside for a while. 'Cause he's struggled, y'know, with his own demons. Maybe they aren't as relatable as Murk's or Glim's... or hell, even my boy Pro-dog. But shit, he's got the biggest demons in the room right about now; the raiders that are ripping people to shreds right now? That's all on him. And then we see him ready to make total war draped in the very epitome of everything that was good and righteous. He earned that moment, he bled for that shit.
This whole fight was never about settling the score between Big Brutus and The Dragon, see? This was about Brimstone fighting his legacy, putting the person who he was into the ground for the last time, and finding the strength to move on from that. And the part that just gets me most is that he couldn't finish the fight for himself. He did it to protect everyone else. He found that power in his true purpose.
And I think he's just about done, now. That makes me kinda sad.
My old E-reader had my progress on this saved... I'm not sure if I could survive binge reading to catch up again.
Pretty good fic and does a great job making you feel the emotional beating that comes with being a slave... Unfortunately it makes you feel the emotional beating that comes with being a slave.
I'll make another attempt sometime when I'm annoyingly happy.
Great work, really.
Its always a joy to read Murky's adventures.
Thank you for the update.
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I gotta agree about how titanically awesome this chapter was.
Hell, I can say this without saying Brim was my favorite: That was straight up the best damn fight I've read in... I can't remember. It was phenomenal.
And I appreciate it even more after being reminded of how strong the themes are and how, like always, the best climactic fights are also the best climactic character moments.
Yes! Finally! Welp, I know what I'm reading... tommorow.
Well they certainly re-made Brutus to last in Fillydelphia. Brimstones old lieutenants certainly weren't anything to sneeze at, especially these last ones.
Also nice surprise guest at the end their. Wonder if they might have any further part in this story?
God...damn
was totally worth the wait i loved it
6448933 I saw your comment before reading the chapter, and was a little confused. But now? God damn indeed!
its here! Ever since project horizons finished this is all that's left. You are the last very good fallout equestria that I can find. You are the sole survivor and I fear the day you finish.
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I wouldn't say he's the /last/. Surely one of the best, but I think you're not looking hard enough. There are a lot of good fallout works in progress.
I'm reading:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/6077/fallout-equestria-new-beginnings
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/662/fallout-equestria-heroes
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/14747/fallout-equestria-morality-of-property (This one seems to only update once or twice a year which is a shame because it has an interesting approach to the wasteland. )
6449778 yes while I have and still am reading heros it just doesn't captivate me like murky does. I like the story I do but it just doesn't rank up there with project and MNS.. While I haven't read the other ones I will surely hit them up when I can. Thanks for providing me some material!
Holy. Crap.
Now THAT was one hell of a battle scene. Goddamn.
Fantastic work, Fuzzy.
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AMEN.
Man, that was intense! And that ending! I completely forgot that Xenith returned to Fillydelphia near the end of FO:E.
Its here boys
OMG Fuzzy
I have loved this story since I started reading it, and every new chapter has me nervous as hell...
I don't want to think about who will make it and who won't.... I don't want to mention who I am pulling for for fear you might end up killing them.
Personally, I this is one of my top three stories I've read so far (Fo:E, and PH being my other top two). Please keep it up. The characters are amazing, their relationships are a joy to watch change and grow... and the villains... all I can say is wow
Also, please know that you have inspired me to try my hand at writing, even though I have never written any fiction before. I just hope it can be a fraction of the quality of your story.
I am waiting (impatiently, lol) for the next chapter.
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"Also, please know that you have inspired me to try my hand at writing, even though I have never written any fiction before."
Amongst all praise, this is one that always makes me smile the most, and is the one I always feel honoured to have said.
I'm super glad you enjoy the story as it leads into its finale now, and on the characters especially; they are the crux of MN7 in the end.
Best of luck in your writing endevours. It's not easy, but just keep pushing to enjoy it. :)
BTW (and I'm pretty sure you're already aware of this, Fuzzy), Mech did artwork of the battle between Blitz and Brutus. It's pretty darn good, but I don't think it does that whole fight enough justice - the scene was just that great.
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Wildcard was talking to us again...
Damn him and his corrupted Pinkie Powers...
Always freaks me out.
Still, awesome fights all around!
Damn.
You know, it's a good thing these chapters come rather slowly, because otherwise I think I literally might have quit reading just from getting overly-emotional.
Also, glad to see Wildcard and his bullshittery go.
Oh damn, I can't handle this, it's too intense, definitely my favourite story on fimfic, your writing is just so captivating. Well done, your story makes my week whenever it updates, and I sometimes think of it, and it makes me happy (yeah i'm a sadistic fucker!) or sad, or hyped up beyond all belief. So yeah your story means a lot to me. Thank you.
A great chapter, sorry I took so long to read it. Hope to see more soon as this story starts to reach its climax.
Arkasia - soldiers I swear this song is perfect for this story.
About this song
The begging sounds great then it hits a point to where it Doesn't sound completely awesome .(about 1:33 - 1:58) Your going to have to either skip through or suffer through that point . Trust me it's worth it the song is so good . Same can be said about the artist , here let me give you some other good songs by him. reason why this song is at the top is because of the weird way it matches whats going on with a lot of it. I mean seriously you can pick out some characters that would go into the song. Hell even the instruments sound like some of the characters.
(Arkasia - stardust) Is about on the same level of coolness with soldiers just without the weird way it matches whats going on.
(Arkasia - New born) this one is third only because in my opinion . Too much drums.
(Arkasia - angel )
(Arkasia - Eathereality )
And many more
CHECK THEM OUT.
WARNING
Some of Arkasia's new music is bad stick to the old stuff.
This chapter had a decent outcome. That's not right... This is MN7... Oh God, the next chapter is going to leave me emotionally shattered for weeks, I just know it.
As badguys are put down and internal conflicts are resolved, I see this story coming to a close. I love finding out how things end up almost as much as I hate knowing there won't be any more. I've loved this story since the day I saw it in an EQD story post, but beyond the events that unfold, the last few chapters are going to taste pretty bittersweet.
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Sometimes you get those typoes which are so legendarily misplaced that I cannot help but laugh at the sheer absurdity of what I somehow wrote.
Yes, it is incorrect. :p
I knew ever since Mac's armor was mentioned years ago when Shackles drug Murky by it that Brim was destined to charge into battle clad inside of it one day. It was even part of what made me know Brim was plot-safe from death (i.e. "I know Brim'll be fine; he never got around to wearing that armor that's obviously too big for anyone else to wear yet"). Soon as he started mentioning needing an edge (as well as many times up to now actually) I thought back and questioned why he hadn't grabbed that decent chunk of hardware. When Glimmer started saying there was a way I swear to god I gasped out loud and uttered the words "Oh shit! It's time!"
I was almost certain this chapter was going to end with a dead friend. Glimmer or Brim most likely. I mean I'm glad they made it, but I felt no sense of plot armor now that the armor had its use.
Wildcard's final words. Pinkie sense is pretty much Wildcard sense. Just with a dash of scary. I wonder if this means they'll be seperated by death? It feels like the obvious way to take it and I guess because it's obvious it's probably not the real meaning. Seriously tho'. That's a creepy dude.
I can't wait for the next chapter. All the way through this I have grown to HATE The Master more and more. I don't want to see him die. I want to see him SUFFER.
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6600280 i want to see him stand up to chain-link and say FUCK YOU and throw a grenade in his face
If this goes all Project Horizons on me and everyone dies I'll cry like a little bitch
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Can you think of any better language to swear in? :p
Im waiting for Murky to fight Shackles and completely wreck his shit with everyone cheering him on.
He should push Shackles off the side of the tallest tower then watch him fall into the pit.
6634458 eh as long as he says fuck you when wile he falls im good
*Patiently waits for when Murky uses that one charge of SATS that's left in his PIpbuck to wreck the Masters shit.*
God Im getting so excited to see how this masterpiece will conclude. I do have my suspicions though.
Best ending (that I can think of): Chainlink Shackles gives epic villain speech, Murky interrupts, kicks Chainlink Shackles' balls (and it actually works this time), Chainlink Shackles falls off of something, grabs Murky down with him, everyone cries, Murky flies back up with sun in background, everyone cheers. This is basically a fusion of all the other suggested endings, and I know the ending is pretty much all planned out by now, but I'm just throwing this out there.
6654282 not realistic but eh as long as murky kills him
6667358 And then during Shackles' autopsy it's revealed he actually is Murky's dad, and Murky's like: "Mmmmmmmmmmmm...shiet." And it ends.
6667368 lol no i see brimstone being his real father but brim dieing and his mom tells him after he escapes
6673055 This should be the beginning of the Epilogue:
"So, what is is like to kill your own father and free an entire city from slavery?"
"Well...you know what, buck you. Now that I think about it, I don't even know who you are. And why are you asking me all these personal questions? Are you a stalker or something? I'm a free stallion now, I don't have to put up with this BS." Murky jumped up and left the room, leaving a dumbfounded interviewer and his 70 pages of research. "Damn...I should write a book about this guy..." The interviewer thought out loud and left as well.
6674179 no hes talking to DJ pony and telling his story to all of Eq
6629430 no i see brim dieing tho
6675717 I'm pretty sure no radio broadcast would be that long (a single MN7 chapter takes at least 1 hour to read, there's 20+ chapters, that would literally take all day), but we all have our own speculations.
All silliness aside, here's my legitimate review of this story:
I don't know whether to take this story seriously or not.
What I mean by that is this story simply does not have a fitting theme. Fuzzy himself admitted in tumblr that MN7 was inspired by real-life slavery (which still exists in places like Africa), and he will re-write MN7 as a realistic story with human characters some point in the future.
Slavery is a very serious and sad theme, but My Little Pony and Fallout are both suppose to be entertaining and fun, which doesn't fit. I know slavery exists in Fallout, but it's much less realistic compared to the literally real-life inspired slavery in MN7.
I am not sure who seriously I should take this story. I am also not sure whether this is a simple fanfic made for entertainment purposes or an act of acknowledgement for real-life slavery that's still going on till this day. I am planning to write a comedic parody of Fallout Equestria featuring characters from the original, PH, Heroes, MN7, and PE, but now that I know MN7 is based on the cruelty of real-life slavery and Murky was originally intended to be a human child, I am not sure whether any form of comedic or entertaining interpretation MN7 is respectful and dignified.
In conclusion, Fuzzy, if you're reading this, answer my question: Should I think of this fic as a form of entertainment capable of being comedic or a solemn and serious reminder of the cruelty of slavery? Please, thank you.
Can anyone say if the fic is finished? Or will it be finished in the future?
Because I see an "incomplete" tag and that there have been no updates for quite some time, so I wondered what is the status of this fic
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I can tell you that it is "2 and a bit" chapters from completion. The first of which is sitting WIP and was worked on as recently as this morning. It'll be finishing for certain, I didn't come this far over 3 years to stop now. :)
6702473 oh, very glad to hear that.
It's a great piece of work, it would certainly be a shame if it weren't finished.
6702473 lol you would be surprised at how many who do
Ewww... I just read some of pink eyes.... and its giving me... FEELINGS!
I need something to restore my Walter like frown and purge my system of all things cute and cuddly lest I... actually crack a smile!
<reads first paragraph>
Much better. Thank you author