Twilight thought it was all so real-- the crisp morning air, the warmth of the rising sun, the ponies that went about their day-- it all seemed real to her. Yet, with the breaking of a single connection, everything comes crashing down, leaving a very confused girl wearing a VR headset.
Maybe she can still relog.
Preread by Thunderous, Babroniedad, EverfreePony, and No name 13, with additional assistance provided by the Write On! community. Formerly preread by Doggyshakespeare and JetXPegasusWWN.
Cover art drawn in collaboration between Momoruuu and myself.
Based off of a chapter from What If...?
A total rewrite of the original Pony-Me™. Want more Pony-Me™ after you finish reading? Here's an original fiction spin on the story for ya.
Story structure: Story arc ◈ Chapter title
Bruh why tf are you reuploading this?
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It's a remake.
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Huh...
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Yep...
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Full rewrite from the ground up.
I suggest doing a little change to the title. Either this one or the old one
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Done.
POG IT IS HERE
Already good :))))
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Spread the word if you can!
I love it already!
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What’s wrong with the original? :/
We were just reading the simulation argument by Nick Bostrom in my philosophy class this week.
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Plot holes and failed sequels, mainly.
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Nice.
It's a shame this last chapter is so short, it's a enjoyable read so far. Overpowered twilight is best twilight.
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"What happens when you realize your life is a simulation?"
Me: Dammit, I wanted this to be a harem isekai with huge anime-tiddied furries!
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Just one large-breasticled Renamon is all I asked for! *sobs square Minecraft tears* MY RENDERING IS ALL CUBED!! I CAN'T FAP TO THIS!!
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As funny as this is, should you really be commenting rhis stuff on a rated E fic?
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seconded
Congratulations, Tonkus, on getting this story featured! :D
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:)
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:)
Ah hah! It lives! Again! Bring it brah!
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Yup!
This taken out of context sounded like that one episode of Spongebob Squarepants
Damn, it's sounded a little dark for some reason... well, for me anyway.
Maybe you should add a dark tag
So was every Major character in ponyville hooked up to that machine? Is she some type of hero now outside of the machine? So many questions and not enough answers. I look forward to more.
I started to read this back in the day, and then it changed, it changed again. Is this the final version? Is it complete and just being released a chapter a day?
Nice solid 7/10 opener. Good job.
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This is a total rewrite. The original still exists and is complete.
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It's a rewrite, and the final version of Pony-Me. I'm publishing new chapters as I write them.
Now this is interesting. Never expected there to be a reboot for this story. I enjoyed the original story immensely, so I'm excited to see how this reimagining fleshes out.
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:D
10575224 Modern rating systems confuse me. I see intense violence as PG-13, but innuendo is R... it's confusing!
Your story reminds me of this video.
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ha. neat.
Still intriguing, still not entirely certain where this is going. Suspense! Kind of, in a meta sense.
:nervousgiggle:
sorry for breaking the 69 like chain..
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No worries.
OOOohhhh, i thought this was just a random haha funny chapter for April 1st, is this actually a regular story update? Like, they’re just back in Equestria now? also loved the little bit about not realizing the first dream ended before the second one started, very clever ;)
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Mmmkinda. It's more of a what if scenario based on the joke chapters I used to write for the original version of this story, where it's revealed that the human world is a simulation as well. This is just a slightly-less-ridiculous take on it. :V
So this is being rewritten?
Huh. I never got around to finishing the original version (stopped at the first Pinkie chapter I think), so I take it there's no reason to bother doing so now?
Either way I shall add this to my read later
(...where it will sit until I finally get around to frequently reading fanfics again).10764660
Yup, chapter-by-chapter. Updates are much slower though now that I'm in college.