Tired of being caught off guard by strange and powerful threats she had no knowledge of, Twilight Sparkle forms the Bureau of Harmony. Tasked with researching extraordinary phenomena and entities, it is Equestria's first and best defense against dangers outside of the normal. Twilight's life changes over the years as she leads the Bureau. Some of it good and some of it heartbreaking. But all she can do is keep moving forward and continue protecting Equestria and those she loves with everything she has.
Chapters (4)
Idea does sound interesting, and it is a good first story idea. But does it need to be anthro? What's wrong with normal ponies?
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What's wrong with it being anthro?
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Because I have never once seen it and the Romance tag not being used at the same time, and it always devolves into shameless smut porn.
And it comes across as the author couldn't make up their mind between ponies or humans, and just said "Fuck it. Have both all wrapped into one."
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Nothing wrong with regular ponies, it's just how the story beats took shape in my imagination. I do this with the stories I come up with a lot. A song or visual is so closely tied to how I first envisioned the scene that it sticks that way.
As for the smut; you don't have to worry about that. While there is some romance in the story, it's all quite wholesome and in no way explicit. I'm nervous enough with my writing, if I tried to write sex scenes I'd probably explode.
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... In a good way? :P
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Amazing story so far, can't wait for next chapter.
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Aw, thanks. 😊
Hopefully you won't have long to wait.
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... You are aware the Sex and Porn tags are typically there in addition in those cases right?
Even if they're added later.
Also, sorry for replying to an old as hecc comment, but i would have gone a little nuts if i hadn't pointed out what i did.
Void Clusters seems like a good way to describe these creatures, dangerous lifeforms in that space between spaces. The Bureau if it does more explanation should definitely make their drones more disposable and not directly connected to their own. Next time they might attract the attention of something intelligent from that place.
A Bureau Tasked with researching extraordinary phenomena and entities, sounds good. I'm actually getting vibes of 'The Magnus Archives podcast' form that alone.
For some reason, I can't help but think that the Dimensional studies could accidentally brush near the Velvet Room and/or Yaldobaoth's plane of existence...P5