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PleaseDoNotDeleteMe


I do this for fun when I have time. All I ask is that I do not get my stories deleted.

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Dropped on the second... And put on hiatus the same day? Don't tell me you're just going to leave it hanging like this, I want to read more. :fluttercry:

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Just until I come up with where I want to take it. I have something like 4-5 other unfinished stories and that’s just the ones I’ve published. Still, have faith I have a plan.

Even if see can't hear them, she does know they were turn into swimwear....Right?

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I'm pretty sure she knows they've been turned into the underwear but since she seems to have a crush on both of them it might be overriding her common sense, also you have to keep in mind she's been pretty much sweating for an untold period of time so she might be a little delirious.

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But the story clearly shows she's in the right state of mind regardless of the heat, so she never was delirious.

The real question is what exactly did the spell do?

Did it just turn them in to swimwear only or did it pull a forgotten friendship and somehow erase every one memories of them as long as they are in that form????

Kinda like that little girl (Sugar) in the Dressrosa Arc of One Piece, who can turn you into a toy with a single touch and at the same time erase everyone memories of you instantly; the people only gain back thier memories after thier love ones were turnt back into human again.

That's what it looks like here, but only the next chapter will tell us.

Wonder when the next chapter will be out???

Love it so far! A little rough around the edges, but great fetish material! Love that them absorbing the sweat makes them feel "right." :)
Are you considering continuing this? Would love to see more!

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Okie dokie. Didn't mean to patronize - sorry if it came off that way!

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No problem. I have a bunch of other stories I’m working on that’s all.

I'm glad this continues. looking forward to the next

I think the rating should be changed to Mature now. Regardless, nice chapter! I love that Sci-Twi's mind is being overwhelmed with pleasure!

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Thirded!

So she does know they were transformed into swim wear. I can't wait to see how things are gonna go between them after the two Twilights turn back to normal.

I hope you continue with this one day it was really fun and sexy.
and twilight her last sentence makes me wonder what she plans it looked like everyone liked how it felt and it be fair if sunset tried it she herself I imagine in the future that they take turns on who is clothes and who wears them

Hope you decide to continue this one day, like Rocksunset said!

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