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Twilight's efforts to guide Equestria into a new era of peace and harmony are constantly interrupted by Starlight, who keeps popping up randomly at the most inconvenient moments.
It happens a lot, put it that way. Better get used to it.
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Good story :)
I laughed at this. And I like the love triangle aspect. It's a good twist on the 2 most common... well both fanships and show teases.
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Thank you.
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That's exactly what I was going for.
So ironic and funny seeing Twilight struggle to calm down a panicking unicorn. That's was Spike's job for the first three seasons of the show
Cinnamon nuts.
Cinnamon nuts.
I repeat; never have I wanted something so much and never known it until I perceived it.
Seriously, though, Starlight's so Starlight that it hurts, Trixie's at the ragged edge of quaint just before it veers off to annoying that I find amazingly well done, and the diplomatic meeting going pear-shaped for Princess Twilight... well there's a lot of stories done that way as of late but few so well-wrapped up as this one.
Another fabulous FIMFic by a fantastic author. Thanks for letting us all see your brilliance once more.
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Yep, always funny when the roles are reversed.
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(seriously, keep up this lavish praise and my head will float away like a balloon...) 
Cheers, now how much do I owe you for the review?
Startrixburst confirmed?
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Well, Vis, cinnamon nuts was a thing that featured in S7E02 “All Bottled Up” in case you didn’t know. Trixie craved it.
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Meanwhile, Celestia laughs hysterically knowing Twilight is now on the receiving end of the teacher/teacher's pet dynamic.
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I thought it was Beatrice...
Tricia won't get her making the little angry sounds she does SO WELL...
Poor Twilight...
Just wait until she has to sort THAT out.
Researching the ancient texts in the one hope that polygamous herd marriages are still legal; while the Friendship School students stare in incredulity as their top three administrators search for the means to "get busy" legally, and the Citizens of Ponyville try to find out if they can ride this particular razor edge themselves.
And when Twilight, leading the ceremony, finally gets the three of them to agree long enough for the extended "I do's" to be said and marked indelibly on the parchment, Fancy Pants lets it out that it was not the finest marriage like this he's attended.
Considering Canterlot Nobility has been at this for the last thousand years...
Three-to-one Twilight marches to Silver Shoals, wraps her petryal around Luna's neck, and unerringly inserts her crown straight up Celestia's 'sunspot'...
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One heck of a typo on my part.
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Not really. Trixie, as a nickname, works for several different names. Beatrice, Patricia, Bellatrix, amongst others.
I went with Beatrice, because it's stogy and old-fashioned; and you just know she would be resentful, and change it at the earliest opportunity she could get away with it.
Bellatrix hits too "Harry Potter" hard, 'Lulamoon' notwithstanding. A pain in the rump she can be, but not one to skip down the street, gleefully chanting, "I killed Twilight Sparkle!!!" sort of nasty antagonist rump pain...
She's pretty unique...having a more or less human sort of name.
Great read, hooves down. I felt myself groaning along with Twilight, mishap after mishap, and laughing too. I really enjoyed the “sneak peek” into Twi’s new everyday life, and has so much fun reading. I’m pretty sure I was laughing tears at the end there.
It’s funny that from particular ponies deliberate sabotage just seems to be standard negligence without additional questions.