Jacob Malcolm, a nine year old boy, and his mother, get a huge surprise when heading home on a dark and stormy night. Four girls who claim to be the Cutie Mark Crusaders from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. But the forth girl was actually Nyx from Pen Stroke's Past Sin, a My Little Pony fan fiction. They were surprised to find out that four fictional characters had became a reality.
But they had to keep the people of the world from knowing that they're from a world where their life is a TV show. Of course, they're going to have stay with Jacob and his mom for a while until they can get back home.
This story takes place after the series ended, but the story of the Cutie Mark Crusaders takes place after the four girls fell asleep at the sleepover in Chapter 9 of Past Sins. This is an alternate ending to Past Sins. I hope you all enjoy this.
To my faithful viewers, I wish for your help. I would like to have an image of human versions of Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Nyx. Message me the image. The one image I like the most will be put in an image for this story.
Great beginnings of the story I can tell this will great story
Apple Bloom: Barbara Apple
Sweetie Belle: Susan Belle
Scootaloo: ??? (she's a hard one)
Nyx: Nicole Moon
This story takes place in the year 2024.
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I thought that the show should take place where the Coronavirus is no longer active.
Great chapter
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How about Scarlet for Scootaloo. Scarlet Allgood?
Great chapter and great names to who made them
You'd be better off getting someone to draw it for you, because I have never seen a picture of a human version of Nyx. Please respond to this comment.
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There are some pictures of Nyx as a human. Just look up "MLP Nyx Human" on Google.
Meanwhile, in Equestria...
Twilight: They fell through a portal. One that opens up around here on occasion. I could force it open, but that would likely destroy it, which wouldn't do anypony any good right now.
Wow I'm shocked of the plot twist of apple bloom mom alive and the boy is her cousin
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I know I'm shocked about it too
oh, what if the children of nightmare get nyx and were able to finish the ritual, but are shocked when their queen refuses to act like nightmare moon.
HOLD IT!
How does Luna know?
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Who do you think was the one who sent the Crusaders to Earth?
Yay great chapter can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter
Can't wait for the next chapter
look up "Uncle Bill's pancake house"
perhaps you could have them visit that place.
Wow I'm surprised can't wait for the next chapter
Great chapter can't wait for the next chapter and great video to the person who made it
Can't wait to what happens in next chapter
what if they get nyx, but nyx states that she refuses?
Wow I'm shocked and can't wait to see what Jacob next step it going to be
Question: can you do the release of the next chapter later like the afternoon ?
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It takes time to write chapters.
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Sorry I just really want to know what going to happen to Jacob
just a little nitpick
welding usually means joining 2 pieces of metal together,
there is a piece of welding equipment that is used to sever pieces of metal, it is called a plasma cutter.
Wow great ending . will there a sequel or not?
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Sorry. This is a one time thing.
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Well either way one of the best stories I ever read
i liked it too
What is the next story you are going to be working on?
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You'll see.
I never actually heard of Nyx until I read this.
Well it also has Dinky so you have have to mess around with the picture a little bit but this is the only one on Derpibooru with the CMC and Nyx https://derpibooru.org/images/1289169
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Actually, it was fan made. I just added it because I just wanted a reason on Pinkie's comment in Past Sins: Chapter 6, "I just read the transcript."
Fun fact: Did you know that Kimlinh Tran, the current voice actress of Valt Aoi from Beyblade Burst, voices Rarity in some of the Gameloft My Little Pony games, or that Jin Aizawa, a character from Beyblade Burst (Season 1), was voiced by Cathy Weseluck?
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There was also the voice of Shining Armor, Andrew Francis, who also voiced Xander Shakadera (Beyblade Burst and Beyblade Burst Evolution). And the voice of Soarin, Matt Hill, who voiced Rantaro Kiyama (Beyblade Burst and Beyblade Burst Evolution). And last but not least, the voice actress who played Sunset Shimmer, Night Glider, Sugar Belle, and the singing voice of Twilight, Rebecca Shoichet, voiced Clio Delon (Beyblade Burst Evolution).
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Man, My Little Pony and Beyblade Burst are more related than I thought.
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There's also one more. And this time, one from the Beyblade Metal Saga series.
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Benkei Hanawa
...is the same voice as...
static.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/7/78/Bow_Hothoof_ID_S7E7.png/revision/latest?cb=20170522222435
Bow Hothoof
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Speaking of Beyblade Burst, have you seen my fanfic yet?
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Also, another fact: Brian Doe, the voice actor for Timber Spruce, voices Gabe Brunai in Beyblade Burst and Burst Evolution.
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Sabrina Pitre, the voice of Luster Dawn, was the voice of Valt, Toko, Nika and Mrs. Aoi in Beyblade Burst and Beyblade Burst: Evolution.
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will there be a sequel in the near future for Jacob? I Like to see more on what he does for his new life with his family.
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Afraid not. Sorry.
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that's ok, just wondering. keep up the great work.