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The Sleepless Beholder


I just headbutt the keyboard till my ideas spill out into writing. Sometimes it works.

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After years building up her courage, Trixie is ready to confess her feelings to Starlight and ask for her hoof in marriage, so she asks Sunburst to choose the perfect ring for her proposal.
However, Starlight has other plans in mind.

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Comments ( 21 )

Sunburst followed her too. “Mom will freak out when I tell her.”

freak out dont be silly double the wife's double the grand foals

As expected this really couldn’t have happened without it being a clusterbuck.

These three are a disaster together and I'm here for it and I love it.

10307756
That is probably the best way of describing them

10307756
I can imagine a vicious cycle of: Trixie does something that is going to doom Equestria => Starlight tries to fix it => Sunburst gets involved => Starlight starts daydreaming about him and makes things worse => Twilight has to fix everything => nopony learns their lesson => repeat.

10307504
Clusterbucks are my main ingredient in these stories by now :rainbowlaugh:

10307473
And he will freak out when his mother tries to plan the consummation of their marriage.

10308048
more inclined to the idea that starlight will ironically cause the problems because she trying to compete with trixie who in starlight mind is getting much closer to sunburst then her, and when it comes to overreacting to sunburst starlight take the town as her former subjects would say

plus add Stellar Flare .. and that a explosive mix

10308057
that sounds like the plot of a sequel wink wink :pinkiehappy:

10308059
That's also very probable to happen :rainbowlaugh:
Equestria was doomed from the start.

10308048
In other words: between the three of them they share one brain cell.

10308093
That gave me Castelvania flashbacks with Alucard, Trevor and Silpha.

I loved this! It went down a road I didn't expect and I loved it.

10365347
I'm happy you liked it! :pinkiehappy:
This was the one that we could maybe do a work together in the future.

And if you like the unexpected, I suggest reading my The Return of Nightmare Moon Is not What We Expected story

10365355
Oh that would be fun!

I'll put it on my too read list! :D

“I’m willing to try. If it doesn’t, I guess my options are either Twilight, or Spike once he reaches age.”

Really, time to sabotage a marriage, mwahahahahahahaha.

I may not like Startrix or Starburst that much but you wrote both pairings well and I like this story.

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Thank you! But be careful to not get caught of you try ruin the wedding. Security has been upgraded since the Changeling invasion

If it qualifies, you might want to add this to the GlimTrixBurst group (in whatever folder is appropriate for the kind of ship).

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