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Shadow Chaser's third adventure finds him in Las Pegasus on a mission to save Equestria and protect Celestia's crown. Shadow must play a far different game than he is used to, after being recruited by Princess Luna, using his wits and magic to overcome the obstacles in his path. Will he be able to stop the sinister plot his reconnaissance uncovers, or will Celestia be forced to step down as the Ruler of Equestria to save her subjects?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 14 )

No more RD in the character list :applecry:

Oh well, here we go again. :applejackunsure:

Yes! More Shadow Chaser! :twilightsmile:

1154762 Unfortunately, no. I just have an easier time writing these if Shadow is by himself. I think you'll be pleasantly surprised by a few things in upcoming chapters though. :raritywink:

Also, just to brag about it a little, I'm happy to say that my cover art was actually done by me this time. I took some time to learn how to vector and came up with my own design this time. :pinkiehappy:

I know I was sad at the start, but now I'm wishing there was a way to double- or triple-thumbs-up this. Excellent work. :twilightsheepish: :yay:

1161602 I knew you wouldn't be sad for long. :twilightsmile:
Unfortunately, updates will be coming a bit slower now. I hadn't planned on releasing the chapters I had written but I got some subtle encouragement from my editor after the third chapter. (I think she just wanted other people to see that one scene with Shadow and Rainbow.) haha

Glad you're liking it.

Wow dude how do you get so many stories idea so quickly? I'm jealous :rainbowlaugh:
And yay new Shadow adventures! (and finally a proper picture of him!)

But ah you had to remind me of the break up but yeah Rarity is totally Ponyville's resident Drama Queen :raritywink:
Oh god I can totally imagine Rarity's diary being really elaborate and all flamboyantly phrased about everything dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png
And Sweetie Belle got rewarded for gossiping after a nice save by Shadow to prevent a nuclear explosion from Rarity
Also I'm betting the whole 'come alone' to Twilight is not what Shadow thinks it is.

Oh snap Dash out of nowhere! But yay at least they are still on friendly yet somewhat awkward terms.
(And Twilight would really be the type to have a crazy scientific view of love :facehoof:)
Also Shadow's conflict about being Twilight's case study and of course he had nothing to worry about in that regard :rainbowlaugh:
And thanks for avoiding the ridiculously over the top formal and outdated speech for Luna that some writers use, it makes it so much easier to understand when it's modern speech. (And Luna is a badass :rainbowdetermined2:)
Wait...can never see his friends again? Faked death? Be brave Shadow! :pinkiegasp:

Eavesdropping on his own funeral? That's both sad and somewhat hilarious.
Cameo time! And AJ's speech is perfect :ajsmug: (Also Shadow as a wild young stallion sounds great)
But Dash isn't there :pinkiegasp:
And lol Spike has only thoughts about Rarity and spying on her.

Yes! Dash really was upset and did care about him despite missing the funeral (and damn nice romantic reunion and that day together :rainbowkiss:)
"We both conceded that likely we would never survive it but promised to never give up on the other as long as our company was bearable." = :heart:

So another epic sized quest for Shadow (with an ultra secret organization this time) has begun. :pinkiehappy:

For all you folks waiting for the next chapter, you'll have to bear with me. Been deathly ill for the past two weeks. Not fun. So in between trying not to die I've been writing. Still a ways to go but it's coming. Promise.

Awesome to see you're writing again. Excellent as always, or rather excellent except the fact that you always leave me wanting the next chapter :twilightoops:

1342339 Haha What fun would it be if I didn't leave you wanting more? :raritywink:

There seems to be a cliff. I seem to be hanging from it.
This is unfortunate.

:fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

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