This is the story of G the Gryphoness
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Interesting entry in this category, but watch your run-on sentences.
Christian will learn to not be so hasty, but perhaps that's why he's a good fit...
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i like it another
i will read, but the gender swap irritate me greatly (its a personal preference of mine to keep canon characters as true as possible when there is no reason to change them, and good reason are especially needed and equally very rare when the gender is the thing to change, the poisoned barb's tale is the only one that did it well enough to keep me reading so far and its only barely.), i might stop because of that but still, i'll give it a go if only because update are slow recently.
hope you don't take this badly, it just my honest opinion that the changes will add nothing that couldn't have happened regardless of gender aside of cliche awkward moments while adding a lot of plot-hole in the known persona of rule 63 characters.
It has potential, but you really need to work on the run-on sentences, spelling errors, and the occasional missing word. Fix that and I can see this turning out to be a pretty good read
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Well to be honest I wasn't sure if I should keep Rainbow a mare or not and just have her get a temporary gender swap potion from Twilight or Zecora for the smexy times. And no I don't think that's rude it is just your opinion and I'm glad you are willing to give it a try.
And honestly, I don't care for rule 63 characters either as they seem to go way too OOC, but when I started to write this I hadn't thought of what I mentioned before. I'm seriously considering rewriting it to take out Blitz and add Dash instead. Any other readers feel like that would help improve this story? Let me know with a comment.
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Yeah I know I wrote the first chapter on my tablet and it is rather difficult to do proper editing and such on one of those. I now have access to my computer so I plan on fixing it up soon.
I'm glad rainbow is not a stallion because I probably wouldn't read it