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Fillyfoolish


No worse than branch-and-bound in a double blind trial

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Twilight needs post-operative bed rest. Her dear totally-just-a-friend Pinkie Pie has other ideas.

Loosely canon to The One with Twinkie Kisses but not a true sequel.


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Such a wholesome, wonderful story. Thank you for writing!

This was a really cute story! Happy to see Twilight's girlfriend totally-just-a-friend be so supportive. Also not a situation I had ever seen in a fic before.

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Either Pinkie Pie dates all her friends or none of them ;)

This is very cute!

I love how Sci-Twi resorts to "scientific paper mode" when she gets overly nervous.

Also has one of the best ways of portraying Pinkie Pie, mindful yet still very upbeat.

So much with so little is the name of the game here, much like my story. Although this one is more about Pinkie's shenanigans then deep emotions, there's still some of it intertwined with her randomness.

I like!

~Kailani Tides~

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Thank you! For a more serious take on this, the canonical reference would stillinbeta's wonderful:

TOne Night in Buckkok
Rarity and Sunset go on a very important trip.
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Comment posted by Fillyfoolish deleted Jun 27th, 2020

I have to say, this felt more fluffy fun than random, so I'm not sure why it has the tag. I really liked seeing Pinkie being so supportive and true to herself without jeopardizing Twilight's health. Also, it's easy to format links in a neater way for the related story. You can use the 'add link' function between the 'add horizontal rule' and 'insert image' on the toolbar.

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Random tag is because it's not... coherent even by fluff standards, I guess. There's not a clear plot here other than "Pinkie has one-line zinger after zinger and Twilight is enamored/mortified" especially the tickling which solely exists for a ladyfingers pun but not strictly in a comedic way either. At any rate, fluffy in-character supportive is what I was going for, so thank you!

Seer #10 · Jun 27th, 2020 · · 2 ·

This is a super sweet and lovely story!
Your character work is really nice here, pinkie and Twilights interactions are really well executed, sweet and comedic and engaging
I love the fact, also, that pinkie is so supportive and caring while retaining her usual 'pinkie-ness', twilights deferral to statistics was some nice, subtle characterisation too.
Really well done, and happy pride month! :twilightsmile:

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Thank you,and happy pride month to you too!

Congratulations on the feature!

Comment posted by Fillyfoolish deleted Jun 27th, 2020

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Nothing like silent downvotes, too. Happy pride! :)

Sweet as the pillow donut. Thank you for it. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Fillyfoolish deleted Jun 30th, 2020

Very cute! I loved Pinkies misunderstandings :)

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Thank you! Pinkie goes out of her way to make sure she is the most misunderstanding friend she can be ;)

“Jelly?” From the bed, Twilight tilted her head for a beat, tilting back with a loving eye roll and a playful shake of her head. “The Neosporin, you mean?”

This gave me the mental image of a neosporin-filled donut, which was not cool!

“Pff.” Pinkie swatted her head and brought her lips to Twilight’s farther ear, her chest dripping down on Twilight’s as she leaned over to whisper, “I could help you do that myself if you prefer.”

Saucy!

“Oh, whoops.” Pinkie crossed her heart with a fist landing in her eye. “I forgot to give you your new lady bits.”

I am enjoying your respect for the Canon.

“Love you too, Twilight.” A parting kiss. “Love you too.”

Sweeter than any donut even Pinkie could bake!


Very sweet, cute story. Pinkie doing her Pinkie misunderstandings, but in the end, understanding everything that matters. Thank you for writing it!

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Only Pinkie Pie could go from "pillow donut" to "crotch jelly" in that short a time. c.c;

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...and EqG Pinkie Pie at that! Thanks for reading :pinkiehappy:

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