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An assassin is on the loose, assassinating ponies who he's been hired to. This assassin will stop at nothing to complete his job. Some ponies know his reputation and will hire him. It's not cheap at all to do so. Will the Mane 6 or any other ponies be able to stop him? Or will he quit?
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Completely agreed.
10660944
This seems logical. Thousand words at the least gives a short, but decent amount of words to read if they are written correctly.
10708610
But the story would be better if it was all one, cohesive thing, with the errors fixed beforehand.
Take it from someone who's made their share of mistakes while writing, people don't like tiny little chapters chock full of grammar mistakes.
For my part as a reader, I usually just ignore a story if I see that the chapters are only a few hundred words long, as that right off tells me that it is probably low quality/low effort work.
It is far better to take your time, get chapters that are at least 1000 words in length, and fix as many of the grammar mistakes as possible before publishing. No one's perfect, nor should someone try to be perfect.
That said, there's a big difference between not trying to be perfect and just not trying at all.
10708980
That's true. I try to make the scenes with good punctuation and grammar, but sometimes my device likes to be haywire and put in the wrong words. It's been damaged. Then I don't notice it; sometimes I do.
10710094
Through the tragic events of the story, the character's personality begins to change; I'm not a country author, so Applejack lines my sound off from her character. I appreciate you for pointing some of the errors out and offering advice that's not insulting in the manner the deleted comments used.
10709833
Fixed that part about two weeks ago, lol. Thanks for letting me know.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
10737594
I would say a little bit because of story-making errors, but I been fixing them, so I have no clue anymore? Maybe because I not keeping the character's Phrases, I'm a little bad at that.? If not, then the story is just not the type for them?
this doesnt look too bad it makes me wonder why the dislikes? only one way to find out
10759000
I don't believe I can't make errors; evidently, I been fixing the errors, so I know that. Most critics advise me to take the story down, which I won't do, some I listen to who are polite such as yourself, and True Edge.
Great story man. Don't stop doing these fanfics cuz I can't get enough of em.
10837737
Thank you! 👍 I won't!
10737666
I agree it doesn't deserve all the hate its getting
Forget the haters keep going with the story MLPKillers! You are doing a great job on it! Ignore the haters. 😎
.... Well you fix this fic a lot don't you? But again, still too edgy and that assassin can count as a "Mary-Sue" if you keep writting like this.
P/S: don't delete comment because it make you eat more tomatoes. I know one author like that and he quit because these tomatoes