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PlayBitz


Hey, I'm Playbitz. I try to write where and when I can and hope y'all enjoy my work!

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This is set in the Beanverse. Prince Baked Bean was enjoying a peaceful day in the Royal Gardens when He was summoned by Princess Luna to help her go through some of her personal spoils of war to find a gift sutable to give to the new Dignataries from the Eastern land of Jolong.

Its amazing how sometimes the things you think you know most about ends up having a much more complex and dare I say, showey way of presenting itself in the most innocent of ways possible.

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Instant fave, upthumb, and stalk from me. I rate this story ten moustaches!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Bean almost became a magical girl. What a world they live in.

Luna walked over to Bean and looked to the collection. "I believe these shall be a good start. If you don't mind, would you care to help me widdle the selection down a bit more?"

I think you mean “whittle” here, as to carve bits off a piece of wood.

Not a bad story, but you should have someone go over it for punctuation edits and grammar.

For instance, I do believe that the title should be “The WANDERING Nose,” not “wondering.”

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Yep, got someone doing just that actually.

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in the source material, its the "Boys" version of Sailor Moon

*deep breath*

All of my "yes!" Come at him now, Tirek! Plot armor (quite literally) is now Bean's to abuse!

Also *TotallyNotEncouragingEveryoneToLike,Comment,andSubscribeForFutureContent!*

*Innocent smile of totally doing that and looking forward to more*

Cool concept. Quite a surprising turn of events for our pacifistic Bean!

Grammarly would fix about 80% of the grammar and spelling issues. Having a good editor go through the story would be worthwhile.

Wait a sec, this is incomplete. Is it mislabeled, or will there be more?

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Ah ha! Someone noticed!

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