“Hello, my faithful student,” The first one spoke motherly.

“Would ye allow us to step inside?” The second one added regally.

This meeting was about to get a lot more interesting.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Well the next chapter will be interesting to read, I’m getting a fairy tail feeling from the guid especially from reading about the noise and fighting

Well now, a curse? *Sips Tea* I am quite curious which direction you will take this. Celestia's darkside (or just her) casting it? Tirek's final spite? Or perhaps some unknown who did it. I am quite eager to see where this all leads

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That's what I was going for with that, glad you noticed

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Oh trust me, it's gonna be crazy when I revel it but for now I'm keeping my mouth shut🤐

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Oh I have very little doubts about that.

This meeting was about to get a lot more interesting.

Indeed is is

Ye might be wantin' ta rid Luna of th' pirate accent.

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Drop kicking drop-kicking ponies everywhere

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I was trying to go with the old royal speak😅

How do I fix it?

I'm getting strong Fairy Tail vibes.

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Simply not using any contractions or using words like "shall not" are enough.

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Well what should I change her sentence too then?

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You can just say "you" for that sentence. It's already formal, so more isn't needed.

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Alright then

something tells me the next chapter will be interesting best get some popcorn for it

‘What is this a freaking anime?’ The human thinks as he sits up while Twilight fires off a thousand apologies a second.

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I regret nothing

Lol. You gender bent spike.😂
Well here comes the princess. Things are about to get very interesting now.

this is getting good, I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter, and from what I can tell Barb is the R63 version of Spike, unless she's an OC

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Heck yeah they are.

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Yeah she's genderbent Spike

I wonder when this curse was placed? It must have been relatively recent like just over a thousand years or so ago for enough records to track the lowering of male birth rate to have survived then again magic exists so maybe such records were mystically preserved. I also wonder if Starswirl is still a stallion and if he is if Twilight is still a fan or maybe if he is a male but over time legends were changed by the increasingly female centric society to have him be a mare.

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You'll just have to wait and see.

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okay, just curious

May the fairy tail be with you hehe. As for questions i say stick with the normal ones for twi about him and his race. Pinkie about food and party's. Fluttershy you already got that one down. Rarity about fashion. Dash and aj will be the hard ones.

Your doing great with the story keep up the great work.

This was a more fun entertaining chapter .I like it better this way.

The Princesses of Equestria?! Uh oh... Well, let’s see how this will turn out. Also, love that Guild, Ronl will definitely fit right in there. Hm, I wonder why the Guild Master’s necklace was glowing in response to Ronl?

God I hope none of the two Princesses are like RD and AJ. It’s bad enough two Element Bearers have a skewered view on males.

Great chapter as always.

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Thanks also it wasn't the Guild Master's necklace but the pear on his cane

I see you got inspiration from Fairy Tail for that Guild.

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Eeyup, I couldn't resist that refrance.

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Whoops. Sorry, I keep forgetting some details, and being a little under the weather isn’t helping.

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I hope you feel better

First off.

Afrotagonist

That shit made me laugh. Ok. I do have some questions for at least some of the girls.

Twilight: What are your dietary needs? Are Humans in your eyes good or evil?

Pinkie: What is your favorite dessert? Can you cook or bake?

Fluttershy: W..what are f...favorite animals?

Rarity: What are the fashion trends in your world?

Hope these are ok bruh. Can't wait for more.

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Same. Thanks.

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Uh Pinkie already asked about his birthday in the second chapter.

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Oh.. I'll change the question. Thanks.

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Thank you.

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no prob bob.

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It's uh Knives. Lol

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No prob bro

Excellent chapter and it sees that Roni will be meeting royalty soon, can't wait to find out how that will go.

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Oh yes it will be funny

The story is getting very interesting but I only have one question what happened to cupcake and carrot cake and Miss Charlie did you replace those characters or something else

Hey man nice to know you still working on this story and it was good got that fairy tail (good anime btw ) vibe going when I read this chapter can't wait to see more

Afrotagonist. I love this. It needs to be used more.

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Yoooo tinman you're always on the best stories. So I know this one is gonna be good.

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Oh it will truth me

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You'll have to wait and see

Question: You're having Motomeru acting less like a sentient/possessed sword and more like an actual person. Wouldn't it be more logical for a sapient sword to be something rather different than a sword shaped person? I bring this up because the wake-up sequence with Moto and Ronl had me repeatedly tripping over the following sequence:

“Morning partner, rest well?” RonI asked as he got out of bed and stretched.
“More or less,” She said, making a so-so motion with her cloth.

I understand wanting to anthropomorphize her but wouldn't it be more interesting writing if Moto had more decidedly "unhuman" traits and behaviors? I.E. Finding being at rest boring/irritating/anxious because swords; sentient or not; do not have an actual biological need to sleep? Just something to think about.