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Lin


The immortality blues is a bullshit!

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Trixie was invited to the Crystal Empire to perform a magic show. One of the spectators was Princess Cadence, the Princess of Love. Without smoke ball and firework, Trixie got a special idea.

Note: This is not a clopfic, no sexual scene contained.

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This is a great story, good job! While there are a few grammar mistakes here and there it doesn't take away from the overall presentation.

I chuckled when the trick was revealed, and laughed hard at the end with flurry heart. A good story. Your grammar needs some work, but that will get better with practice.

Lin
Lin #3 · June 20th · · ·

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Thank you very much!
Because I'm a non-native English speaker, I always make grammar and spelling mistakes even I have checked many times. :facehoof:

Before reading: this was the worst idea ever, Trixie

After reading: this was the best idea ever, Lin

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Thanks for reading! :heart:

“It’s Cadence’s idea,” answered Shining, “The Crystal Fair has been held for many years, but she complained that it always looks the same, so she wanted something new this time.”

Cadance, you are playing with fire...:facehoof:

“Thanks. Now, listen to me carefully, and answer my questions honestly,” said Trixie, “Question one: How often do you do that?”

You're doomed, Trixie.

Queen Chrysalis! She was back!

Twilight, wake up! You're just being paranoid!

“EAT” and “eat”.

wut?
I...I'm confused...

Sex jokes always get me every time I read them.
Also, I want to mention that 'Cadence' should be replaced with 'Cadance'.Look at the tag.
Hasbro has changed her name since S4, although I don't know the reason behind it.
Still, good story. Why don't you post it on FT though?

Lin
Lin #8 · July 18th · · ·

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居然有人从FT追击过来了!:pinkiegasp:
我也很好奇为什么我会找错了译名,我不逐一修改了,懒得找。
反正……就是不打算发FT,原因有点不好说……不过某天我可能会改变主意的。:pinkiesmile:

FT译本已看到,来此拜读原版
虽然已经被告知没有clop情节,但是看到其中的部分描写,我还是想多了
说,你叫我半夜在被窝里笑出声来是何居心?
Although I have been told that this isn't a clopfic, but some of words still make me think too much...am I...?
So, why do you make me laugh so loudly in the midnight?

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如果你半夜的笑声吵醒了你的家人或者同伴,那么记得给他们也分享一下,一起笑个够:rainbowlaugh:

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