Nice to see another update so soon, wonder when he will start to realize some inconsistencies with himself.

...he brushed against his ears while running his hands through his hair?
Are his ears shifting, or was he brushing the sides of his head?

Chapters 4 and 5 are great!

You’re being watched. Wooden masks twisted into scornful scowls surround you on all sides. You feel like you’re being pricked with a thousand little needles, all over the surface of your skin.

Talk about staring daggers at someone!

Whats your choice of genre?