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naturalbornderpy


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After a thousand years spent trapped on the Moon, Princess Luna is officially back home.

Tired and weary, she would truly like nothing more than a nice, long sleep.

Sadly, Princess Celestia has other plans for her dear sister.


Artwork by MagnaLuna. Thanks for all those that pointed this out!

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Comments ( 34 )

Dawwww...

That's adorable!!

Sure hope neither of them snores. Can't imagine what "Royal Canterlot Snores" are like.

**hugs story like a giant teddy bear**

Yes. More of this.

This was really sweet, I am glad you wrote this (edit: spelling)

That was super sweet, and I can definitely see Celestia acting this way. She dearly loves her sister, and it must have been extremely painful for her to have her gone for all these decades.

Well done!

10291984
I don't see any sweat; did I miss that part?

OP, the style of the art suggests that it's MagnaLuna who is the artist. She's the only one I know who curves Luna's horn like that.

10292085
Oh. Yeah, sweat isn't all that sweet. :rainbowlaugh:

10292131
No it isn't:twilightoops: Let's just say that the story was so good that it made me completely forget English language:twilightsheepish:

Short but sweet. Have an upvote. :twilightsmile:

You wouldn’t believe the rampant ninja problem Canterlot has currently.

Succinct, but sweet. Concise, but clear. 10/10. Have an upvote. Oh, and a favorite as well.

Talk about one sweet story that really warms up your heart in so many ways! My god this was an absolute treat to read and is very much well written in everything! Awesome! Hope ya didn't mind, but I made a lil' audio reading of this beauty ya made!

Audio Linkery!: https://youtu.be/X_vAkLAWWtc

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

Just in case...

Check magnaluna over at deviantart for the picture...

Certainly looks like theirs...

Oh...EXCELLENT story. Reminds me of a certain orange orchard-tender and a younger sister with a bow the size of Manehattan...

Heavyhauler75622

Aww. C'mon, Luna, you know your sister is only trying to make up for centuries of lost pampering.

But yeah, sometimes sleep is the best remedy for anything, so I feel ya.

Heckin' dorbs!

Dawwww... :)

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Tiny typo

Luna’s pillow had found it’s mark

its

Celestia is a master wordsmith.

This is me, in a nutshell, every morning. Only it's my dad waking me up. Still, hilarious yarn, 10/10, may read again.

Luna merely faceplanted into it, stretching out all four legs in all directions in order to cover as much of it as possible. She wanted to drown in that bed just then. Marry it , if she could. It was nice of her sister to keep her old room in such a nice, clean state over the years—bed, pillow, and covers included. She’d have to thank her in the morning…

I don't think Canterlot existed before Luna was banished. Their previous home was the Castle of Two Sisters that is in ruin at the Everfree Forest and that is where Luna was locked to the moon as Nightmare Moon.

Canterlot would most likely be an entirely new place to Luna, which she probably wouldn't care under the context of this story at the time since she wants sleep above all else.

"You get two more words if they're "with Honey""

Once again she rolled herself over, dragging her bedsheets along with her. Soon she looked more like an alicorn burrito than a peacefully sleeping pony.

Where is the difference?


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

10298547
I'd prefer salt on mine to be honest.
TO OFFSET ALL THE SWEETNESS HERE GODDAMN! But no seriously, I prefer savoury so bring a salt shaker with you if you would.

I love that cover art! It's so cute!

This is one of my favorite sister fics with the princesses I’ve ever read. It was hilarious!! And that ending was perfect!!:rainbowlaugh:

10310085 Thanks for saying so! :yay: Glad you enjoyed it.

When did Celestia turn into Pinkie Pie? Jeezus.

Short and sweet indeed! Loved the mix between Luna's sarcastic sleepiness and Celestia's enthusiastic pampering, well done :)

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