Love Crusaders

by Comrade Bagel Muffin

Epilogue

Two Years Later

Scootaloo walked down the streets of Ponyville. Riding on her back was her first born. Born only nine months after she and Featherweight had their first date, and five months after they were married. The cute colt had her mane, and a darker beige than his dad. The colt babbled as they made their way slowly down the street. Scootaloo smiled as she felt the small hooves of her second one kicking inside her. She moved along the street, arriving a few minutes later to the old CMC club house that had been converted nearly a year ago to a play house for the new foals.

"Hello Scootaloo." Sweetie smiled and waved as Scootaloo walked up the ramp. Even after having twins she still had the body of a model. Not that Scootaloo was jealous, after she had given birth Gust she quickly lost weight back to her athletic figure. Still she was impressed at how well Sweetie looked. The sound of laughing filled the air as the two of three of them walked back into the CMC club house.

"Howdy Scoots, how're you and Gusty doing?" Apple bloom asked as she watched her daughter Fuji Apple playing with with Smash Monitor and Sweet Note. Apple Bloom was pregnant again like her, and it looked like she was going to be having twins. The hospital said they wer both going to be colts. Scootaloo put her son down and the foal made his way over to his friends.

"We're doing good." Scootaloo smiled and sit down on the couch watching with a smile as Gust and Smash began playing with the blocks. She put a hoof on her bulging womb. "Featherweights doing good too. With our daughter on the way he's kind of panicking, not as bad as with Gust but still."

From the couch she watched her son play with Sweetie Belle's colt. Smash and his sister Sweet both had the coat of their father, and purple a purple stripe going through their brown manes. Fuji Apple played with dolls with Sweet as the colts played with their blocks. Fuji had a coat color that was somewhere between Apple Bloom and Tender Taps. And her mane looked like Scootaloo's when she was a filly.

"Can you blame him for panicking over Gusty." Sweetie Belle sat next to her on the couch. "You somehow managed to take our plan to see if we could get Coltfriends to mean 'to see if we could get laid up and hitched'." She smiled at her friend. "I don't know where you got that idea from."

"Well you know me I'm just naturally competitive, and you and Apple Bloom were clearly escalating." She gave a playful smile at her two friends. "And besides we all got married at the same time, and if I recall you both were just one month behind me when it came to having your foals."

"Well I mean Tender and I were already kind of leaving with each other and his bucking was a serous help on the farm." Apple Bloom conceded. "And let's face it we all kind of Figure Sweetie and Button would be the first one's to have a foal."

"Well we certainly tried." Sweetie laughed, then looking at the foals playing she sighed. "You know Cutie Mark Crusaders Love Crusaders was probably our best Crusade and my favorite."

"Yeah." Apple Bloom nodded.

"Ditto." Scootaloo smiled.

Comments

[Yoshifan30]

wow All through the girls got married and have kids Dang thats sweet This was a pretty good story

[Comrade Bagel Muffin]

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Merci Beaucoup.

[Yoshifan30]

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No problem and keep up the good work 😊

[Blueninetails]

Responding from the message you left on my profile page, figured it made sense to leave it here since it pertained to this story.

What I liked about the story is how cute each of their dates went, and how each couple had fun in their own way than just the simple dinner and romantic activity. Don't get me wrong, I would've appreciated a generic romantic date all the same, but things like how Tender and Applebloom pretty much just went clubbing made it feel rather unique. Also, I have a soft spot for less than popular ships, so things like Featherweight and Scootaloo getting together easily catches my attention.

That said, this is a very good story. Short and Sweet. I do wish certain things were slightly expanded a bit more, like how the barkeep knew Tender Taps, and maybe him teasing Tender Taps a bit more about finally working up the nerve to ask Bloom out, but I enjoyed the story nonetheless.

[Comrade Bagel Muffin]

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Merci Beaucoup

[Comrade Bagel Muffin]

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I think that they'll grow out of it.

[Comrade Bagel Muffin]

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XD Well I didn't say it, but I can support it.
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What's the first then?

[Blackraven]

A few mistakes when it comes to spelling and grammar. however ,no doubt enjoyable

my thoughts and suggestion:
*Lovely read
*I recommend you type out your stories on grammarly or Microsoft word then copy and paste

[Comrade Bagel Muffin]

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Many Thanks and I'm glad that you liked it.