A ship nopony has heard about or seen shows up at the docks in Manehattan. When Celestia hears about this she asks the main 6 to investigate. While they're looking around, the ship comes to life and drives out on the sea with the mane 6 still onboard.
Might want to add more to your descriptions. The Title could be improved as well.
The only thing that caught my attention was the picture.
nice keep it up during both world war hospital ship are targeted by german and japanese sub
the hague and geneva convention forbidden targeting ship baring the red cross that ship during ww1 was attack on purpose
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The HMHS Britannic sank because a misplaced mine.
So what HMHS stand for any way?
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HMS stands for Her madjestys ship. Im assuming HMHS means Her madjestys hospital ship.
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Right...
Oh. That's where all of this boat stuff in your blog posts is going. I'm adding this to the tracking bin because I am already reading 3 fanfics. One is short, the others not so much.
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His Majesty's Hospital Ship
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Right...
Look like they about to find out the secret of the ship
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And more ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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His Majesty's Hospital Ship
This looks to be a very interesting story.
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Thanks!
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You're very welcome.
BRUHHH I love this ship so much! Thanks for putting Titanic's forgotten sister into a story!
Based on the cover description alone, someone already has this kind of story on the Titanic.
Sorry for the spoiler.
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No problem. I love Britannic the most out of the three sisters. #RememberBritannic
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Remember Brittanic!
I really wish that James Cameron would make a movie about that ship too. Historical piece set in WWI and maybe centered around Nurse Violet Jessup?
I would pay MEGABUCKS to see that movie if it ever got made.
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Britannic already has a movie for itself that came out in 2000
it fine pluse I found video of youtube channel of history of the famous boat that sink so this history of HMHS BRITANNIC SINKS and this link will tell the tales of her: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qr5HmOJtgSI
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I've seen the video. The animators must be so proud of it!!!
of course. If you see it then you must remember what happening. I just to refreash your memory to your story so the mane6 will uncover the history and retell the story to them.
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No need to watch it for me.
have you write of ghost train before?
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Nope
have you plan on writing for it?
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The ending is already written. I'm writing the next chapter now.
I mean writing ghost train story?
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I'll think about it
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An interesting chapter, I must admit it.
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Thank you
ETA on next updoot?
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Depends on my motivation for it. Currently its TBA.
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Kay. Is good story.
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Thx
Interesting. A good start. One note though, the Olympic class liners (Olympic, Titanic, and Britianic) only had three screws, and only the port and starboard could go I reverse. The center screw was powered by a low pressure turbine that could only go forward. So there would only be three telegraphs on the bridge. Just note. 'Axe
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I'll edit when I get home from vacation.
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His/her
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Her_Majesty%27s_Ship
so when will the next chapter be up?
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When I get the motivation to write it.
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Although I wrote the ending beforehand, so there is little chance that I'm giving up on this story.
Next I'll be seeing the Carpathia. Good story so far.
its time for a new chapter
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It's at 747 words now. I'm just trying to push in a little more.
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as long as we all get more chapters then do what you need to do but don't keep me waiting for that next chapter
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I'm nearly finished. It'll be released either today or tomorrow. Pinkie promise.
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Oddly, very few have ever written about HMS Olympic and HMHS Britannic.
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true but there is also a lack of warships that have a human mind in them