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Quite a contrast from the original! I'm really digging it. Keep up the good work.
I really like the way Lemony is introduced to the Wasteland. Not with shocking imagery of equine cruelty, but of a quiet, almost serene mountain area that was described as if it were the afterlife itself. It really helps to set Lemony apart from other Stable Dweller characters.
Nimble's introduction was well executed, we learn everything about her through her clumsiness and the way she immediately chats with Lemony as if they were already friends. It amused me that Lemony lies to Nimble simply out of fear of offending her.
The description of her father holding the world record of being the grumpiest pegasus was a delight to read. Really dig that he pretty much realizes that Lemony is just like him and his daughter, not from the Wasteland.
I do like how this chapter paints a negative picture of the Enclave; that sounds odd for someone like me to say, but I've seen some sidefics be... more forgiving to the terrible jingoistic ethnostate than they honestly should, to put it politely as possible.
Looking forward to reading more!
I really love this, and absolutely agree with everything TheWanderingZebra said!
I especially feel extremely moved by Lemony's attitude towards her grief here. I've lost a close loved one as well, and I wish someone had taught me to grieve the way Lemony does here:
I'm so excited to continue on this journey ^^
I have read a fair few FoE stories by now, so by this point do I feel that I have seen most takes on the Equestrian wasteland, I have read about the snowy tundras in the north, about so many versions of the casino of Las Pegasus and the NCR, but this is the first time that anyone have written about the ruins of the pegasus cloud cities and I must say that I quite like it and wonder why this is the first time anyone brings such an amazing element of the MLP verse up.