Twilight is peer pressured into unleashing the magic she collected during the friendship games and she does, creating a powerful sphere of magic that consumes her, but she's not the only that is dragged in.
A 'what-if' story and something that just randomly popped up in my mind.
Please have good reason to dislike it.
I hope there's more to this.
Is that... it?
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There will be more.
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There's a reason why it says 'Incomplete'
Meanwhile, the rest of the Crystal Prep team's just standing there awkwardly, wondering if they're still going to play Capture the Flag.
I've long wanted to see someone explore this concept. I'll watch this with interest.
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Some people forget to mark their stories as Complete when they're done, so I was just making sure.
Sounds like a good idea about how the girls are going to control their Midnight from...
I'm going to say that Rainbow Dash is pulling out the "Batman" scheme to be a hero and ending up as Spawn
And you forget the humor tag
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I wasn't really sure about having a third tag. Did some part of this chapter make you laugh?
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Well, the part of the mirror, but that's your decision of course depending on how they're going to control their new forms
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That was just a normal Pinkie Pie joke, there will be plenty of those, but this story is not going to focus on comedy.
So, basically applejack f*cked them over.
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She realized they had no other way out of it.
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I would have understood if her grip had slipped like sunset’s, but she willingly let go. Even if it seemed like there was no way out at least try, besides that’s never stopped them before.
Intriguing enough to keep an eye on, but not enough to consider myself sold yet. More horse words will be needed to make that decision.
Ever gonna continue?
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When I figure out how to continue it.
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fair. Thank you for responding
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Np
sees story cover
Yep, that is definitely something that will make people shit their pants.
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Yup
Intriguing.
Eternal Hiatus™️, but good concept.