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Did you make the cover art?
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No. Unfortunately, I cant draw worth a damn
I did link to the source where I found the drawing, but I dont know who created it. Sorry I couldn't help you. Thank you for taking an interest in my story!
Cadance: AUNTIE!! All these years you are already married and you haven't told me?! I already prepared the lists for your potential suitors for nothing!
Other than the gender shifts from he to She it was well done
Dem long walls of text tho
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I mean, its probably more princess bias
I m very glad to see someone writing Twilight right. Many write her oblivious and unperceptive to the subject. But that's not how scholars are. Yes, she might be overbearing, cannot get a clue, can be too focused to pay attention to world around if it is not part of her study... but you can't learn from books if you can't pay attention to details.
She spots little details and builds proper conclusions on them but also may miss a simple idea, being focused on a more abstract one, where child-like Lyra beats her.
Is Artemis male or female? I tend to get confused at certain word usage
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I'm sorry to hear that.
Artemis is female. I maybe typo'd a 'she' with a 'he' or something like that. I keep trying to go back to find and edit parts that might be confusing, as someone before you has also pointed out that they got confused, but I can't for the life of me find it. If you or someone reading this comment could point it out I'll fix it. Thanks for reading!
This is by no means the only example, but to say a characters a doormat, rates at least some example.
This is an interesting story, but it does irritate me. From the very beginning, the character is just wishie washie. She lets everyone walk all over here. She lets others drive her life and disregards her opinions several times. She just doesn't stand up for herself at all. When Purple Smart sent that letter to Celestia, that was a real deal breaker, but the character just shrugs it off holding no consequences.
I have a hard time empathizing with characters who allow others to abuse their trust and who dont stand up for themselves.
I hope this improves as the story progresses.
The Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze
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That's a really good point, thanks for commenting!
I'll keep this in mind going forward.
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Its somewhere in the first chapter about Artemis. I was confused as well thanks about that being cleared up.
I'm guessing next chapter will begin with Twilight either having a panic attack or being stunned speechless and fainting.
I knew it was something like that.
Ohohohoho shit, purple smart is about to break lol
He was covered in Blue scales that seemed to catch the light and shimmer slightly.
I am pretty sure spike is a shade of PURPLE and definitely not blue 0_0
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blue + red = purple tho...