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Luster Dawn is having the worst day of her life. How will she be affected when she receives a visit from the strangest-looking creature she has ever seen?
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EDIT 06/14/2020: Now with an audio reading, compliments of StraightToThePointStudio!
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That was really good. Nice and deep. I wasn't looking overly closely, but there weren't any glaring errors, so nice job on that.
And thank you for getting him to leave before he could call himself 'Anon.'
Very cute story! Nice work DivineRoyalty!
A man after my own heart.
The message behind this story is very nice, though I can't help but wonder about Anon's mentioning of Luster Dawn maybe becoming the next Princess. Compared to her predecessors, Twilight passing down the mantle after only one generation is lightning fast.
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Well thank you very much! Between you and me, I actually pictured the human in question in this story as being a very particular wholesome man who I very much admire. I just didn’t know how the audience would react if I named him. XD
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Thank you so much!! :D
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Well, so far as I can remember, Princess Celestia doesn’t really mention having many other students than Sunset Shimmer, Princess Cadence (though to call her a student is a touch dubious considering Celestia straight-up adopted her) and then eventually, Twilight Sparkle. I would agree that it would be odd for Twilight to pass down the mantle after only one generation, but perhaps Luster is one being groomed to rule alongside her, like Luna and Cadence rules alongside Celestia? Who knows! It’s just fun to imagine the “what-ifs,” in my opinion.
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nice story :D
A heartwarming little story. I only noticed one error; when Luster first discovers a human on her couch, there's no mention made of her putting distance between herself and said human, but then she trots back to the couch. Other than that, though, it was a very enjoyable read.
Oh, you sweet summer child.
Do we have some stories for you. That was delightfully wholesome. I don't tend to have days like that, but I imagine this is what's needed when we do. Take my thumbs up.
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Thank you very much!! I really appreciate it!! :D
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There is no explicit mention, no, so thank you for pointing that out. I tried to imply (I think, it was 5:00-7:00AM at that time) that Luster's startled response caused her to jump off of the couch, but that probably wasn't very clearly articulated.
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I'm very happy that you enjoyed it!! Thank you for your kind words!
Not gonna lie, this left me reflecting and contemplating for the rest of the hour.
Great story, with a very important message for the proud and heavily-ambitious folks out there, myself included.
Eager to see more!
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I'm wonderfully happy that you enjoyed it!!
This is simply beautiful!
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Aw, thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!
Maybe Twilight should tell her about her adventure with a certain library book?
I woulda never thought I could enjoy this any more than I possibly could, but I did and you wrote everything here fantastically! Teaching a nice life lesson, adding in some laughing moments, the sadder ones, everything! This was all such a treat to read! Hope ya didn't mind, but I made a lil' reading on this!
Audio Thingy!: https://youtu.be/93q1_Z5vPnE
(I don't mean to somehow offend anyone with this comment!)
I love little stories like this. You dont need guns, or sex, or monsters.
Just two characters a sofa and some tea.
Story telling at its best.
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“I mean, you just seem to walk in random directions most of the time. How do you ever get to where you're going?" "Oh, that's easy," said Candy with a smile, ”I just make the place I end up, the place I wanted to be all along." There was an extended moment of silence. ”That... that's absolutely brilliant," -Trick Question
A heartwarming tale involving our newest student of royalty. Bravo
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Wow!! Thank you so much for taking the time to do that!! I really appreciate it!!
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Thank you kindly! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! :D
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Thank youuuuu!!
This was so good.